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    this is my last submission - a poem titled "4 feet and 4 hooves"

    il post the details and poem in a few mins when I get home


    its a basically poem from olaf's pov
    this poem is written in a scenario where olaf , anna and the rest met like in the movie. The only twist is that anna didnt recognise olaf and instead was creeped out by him. Thus they never completed their journey together and elsa became the evil ice queen who took over the world.


    4 feet and 4 hooves
    they set off on an adventure
    wandering through the blizzard
    sven , sven and anna
    roaming aimlessly as they shivered

    I was just being friendly
    I could've helped them on their quest
    to find their mysterious pal
    with magical powers she had supressed

    four seconds later
    my head was flying through the air
    the girl had kicked it off
    Scattering my glyph steels everywhere

    They may have never seen someone like me before
    i guess im really rare
    No reason to run away though
    that was just not fair

    Its been 47 years
    huddled up in my cave
    hiding from the ice queens wrath
    Playing PL while the world rot in its grave

    I think about her when im depressed
    the way her hair rolled off her chest
    her glittery blue eyes
    glancing back at me at me with detest

    I guess i need to move on
    But im sad that it could have been
    the best day of my life
    in this loveless frozen dream




    and this is the closeup of olaf sitting next to his phone with pl open. it illustrates a line in the poem where hes all alone playing pl in his cave. (hence the darkness and shading)
    the verses are written in the area where the light from his screen shines on.
    Last edited by for the lulz; 01-26-2015 at 01:32 PM.

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