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    Default The History Of Alterra

    Alterra

    An interpretation of historic events from the collapse of the Elven kingdom to the Great Invasion.



    Chapter I - Pride Conquers Wisdom


    In the time before the great Atlerrian war, there existed a tranquil kingdom, home to the first of all beings, the elves.

    With wisdom and strength they reigned over all of the known world, from the southern kingdom, to the great ice cliffs of the north. Using powers of nature they would manipulate the world as they saw fit - creating new lands and species. Guardians of the ancient ’Orbs of Nature’, they were life-givers of the Alterra realm.

    The oldest of these elves was the Queen herself. She ruled her kingdom with incomprehensible wisdom and governed her race for centuries as they populated as far as the great light reached. For many years, the elven schools taught the young of magics and the ways of wizardry. Allies to the environment, the elven race advanced at unrivaled pace gaining wisdom and great understanding. The wisest of these elves, Marlow, showed great potential from a very early age and was appointed as the Queens right hand advisor. Together they would rule over the species of Alterra and reconcile matters of conflict within the realm maintaining peace and harmony between the races.

    Unfortunately the new generation was excelling in wisdom far faster than their ego could handle and soon their pride took over. They began demanding from nature, rather than working along side it as the elves before them had done for centuries.


    The Queen detected this change and demanded a complete shut down of all Elven schools in an attempt to quench the flame of pride. She ordered that practice be limited to healing and preserving nature. However, drunken on self-confidence and convinced that dark magic was the way forward, Marlow began conjuring plans to overthrow the Queen and lead the Elven race to an era of increased wisdom and power.

    End of Chapter I




    Please check out the Pocket Legends Wiki for other entries. I'll be adding chapter II later on today which will feature the birth of the Avian and a little history on the NPC, Sirin.

    Any places or characters used are from the game itself. And just to get you interested, here's a list of chapters that are on the way;

    Chapter II - A Warning - Now Available. Click here to read.
    Chapter III - Better to have not Loved - Now Available. Click here to read.
    Chapter IV - Sirin's Plight - Now Available. Click here to read.
    Chapter V - The Kingdom Falls
    Chapter VI - The First of the Ursan
    Chapter VII - The Heavens Invade



    Appreciate any feedback
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    Nice diz cant wait for the next chapters
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    Nice, Love it!
    NO MATTER WHAT, I AM PROUD TO HAVE OWNED THE FIRST EVER GUILD

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    this is brilliant only because of the pics =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by King Richie View Post
    this is brilliant only because of the pics =)
    You're such a child. xD

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    haha i wish !

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    Stop being 'Child'ish. Sorry for that really bad pun. I will walk away in shame and never be seen or heard from again.
    NO MATTER WHAT, I AM PROUD TO HAVE OWNED THE FIRST EVER GUILD

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    Dude, that's sweet and well written!

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    Quote Originally Posted by flaimdude View Post
    Dude, that's sweet and well written!
    Thankyou very much flaim

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    *mumbles*the pictures still make it better*mumbles


    Thank you rebel for fantastic Sig Pic

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    Your still being a child. xD
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    You never let me have fun !!


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    I am so sincerly sorry!
    xD
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dizko View Post
    Thankyou very much flaim
    You are very welcome man.

    Quote Originally Posted by Reaper View Post
    I am so sincerly sorry!
    xD
    AND I AM GENUINELY SORRY ABOUT THE WINDOW! XD +2 points if you know what movie that's from.

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    this story excited me..
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    Quote Originally Posted by sandman2013 View Post
    this story excited me..
    You get aroused by stories? XD
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    Quote Originally Posted by Reaper View Post
    You get aroused by stories? XD
    Just well written ones, obviously.

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    Wow. I Usually NEVER like fan made fics but wow.
    I love this, look forward to future installments

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    Quote Originally Posted by RedRyder View Post
    Wow. I Usually NEVER like fan made fics but wow.
    I love this, look forward to future installments
    Thanks for the awesome feedback

    This chapter was actually my least favourite so hopefully you like the next even better

    I think I'll add chapter two before I go to bed tonight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dizko View Post
    Thanks for the awesome feedback

    This chapter was actually my least favourite so hopefully you like the next even better

    I think I'll add chapter two before I go to bed tonight.
    how about for each chapter you make, I'll do a correspoding picture for the chapter.

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