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    Default Language Arts Poem Project

    What do you guys think? 10 lines with rhyme. (Had to copy and paste. Said my file was to large to be attached.)



    “A Game Called Pocket Legends”

    You see, there is this game I enjoy to play
    With friendly players from around the world all day
    This game is called Pocket Legends
    If I could, I would never put it down even for a second
    I meet many players and friends online
    Most of them are very kind
    My level 59 archer is sure to destroy enemies
    While the nearby mage spams heals and freeze
    So you see, I clearly enjoy this game
    And it is certainly anything, but lame!

    Any improvements or errors?

    STOP! DRAGON TIME!
    PLEASE CHECK OUT MY OTHER EGGS!

    PL: BUUBUUFTW, CHICKSTRIPPP, XXBUUBUUXX
    SL: BUUBUUFTW

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    Cute poem! I would add a few more commas in some spots but I'm no language arts expert lol

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    Imao!

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