Quote Originally Posted by Quebble View Post
Here's my story,it's quite lame though since I did it in 10 minutes and I'm only 13 -.-



I decided to go for the non offensive approach."Alastor,I'm......"Before my words could trail off,he leapt out at me,his claws threatening to rip me into pieces.Momentarily stunned,I dodged,but his claws managed to do a scratch to me.Knowing that he had gone insane,I tried to calm him down,but to no avail."Alastor,you don't have to do this...." but that only made him more ferocious.Blood was oozing out out of my wound,and I could not hold out for much longer.Using the last ounce of my strength,I charged at him.One moment it was a howl of dread,the next was a soft whimper as Alastor fell onto the ground while the crimson blood filled the street."I have cured you Alastor....."I walked away,full of regret.



That's it,tell me if I made a grammatical error or spelling error because I wrote on a piece of paper and transferred it to my iPad.

Your last quote was the highlight