Yes... Just post it in this thread.Originally Posted by Junside
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Yes... Just post it in this thread.
Ohhhh Kay... here I go.
As I see him now, it seems our memories are all lost in our demonic forms. We stand before each other, calm but burning eyes. The moon sets the stage for the battle for our lives. As hunger dictates him, he stares at my empty gaze. The confidence of how I could destroy him in many ways...
I say not much... but I do apologize. "My brother, I love you. But now you must die..."
The ground below trembles with his heavy tread. My vision rumbles as I look to see, my brother with passion to relentlessly kill me. Our shadows pass, and for that slight moment we were together again. The full moon applauds us with its silver glow. It applauds for my tears. For my dear Alastor is dead. A trail of blood leads to his lifeless form. Human again, surprisingly, with my blade protruding from his heart...
Forgot to put my name
IGN: Erik
Last edited by Junside; 09-02-2012 at 09:52 PM.
Is the word hell allowed? Is that appropriate? I use it one time, and I know some people are offended by it.
It should be appropriate if used in the right context.
Ok, well here's my ending, 150 words. A little jerky but I tried to smooth it out a little. Hope you guys like it!
The thin man sat in the chair, slouched. "Sir, tea?" A woman's voice stated.
"Get the hell away from me." The man stood up abruptly, sending the tea cups and coasters flying across the room.
"Get me my coat already, it's time I pay a visit to the asylum."
"He's defiantly loosing his brain." Whispered a lady.
There in a bed lay a old man, "Ahhh! How are you my dear friend?" The old man asked.
"Good as always Mr. Hyde."
"Today, I am a little bit antsy, without my morning cup of tea...." the thin man stammered.
The old man rested his head to stare into the eyes of the thin man. "Sometimes, we humans are blind to what hurts us..."
The thin man flinched, remembering his diseased other half tell him those very words.
"Um, Mr. Hyde, I never caught your first name, sorry."
"Oh, it's just Alastor."
Name in-game: Rafela
Last edited by Running Pear; 09-03-2012 at 11:12 AM.
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