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Anymove
06-07-2013, 12:05 AM
Unce upon a time, there lived a flock of mythical creatures in a forest somewhere in Indonesia.
They called themselves Garudas.
Garudas loved to fly. Searching new adventures was very challenging for them.
Garudas could fly very fast, approximately 20 m/s.

One day,
The Garudas' commander, Zecimoeds, called all the Garudas fighters to defeat the evils called Eagles.
The evil group of Eagles lived on the top of a high mountain. Eagles' leader was Elang.
Eagles could fly about 10 m/s, they had a sharpen beak and could break human's bone with one bite only.
Garudas hated Eagles' habits.
Eagles always ate the other creatures, like Snakes, Mice, small Tigers, and many more.
Because of their power, The Eagles wanted to kill all Garudas.

Then they made a war there called "Supermassive Fly-ters".
They fought on a big white shiny cloud, called "The Seventh Sky" and divided into 2 team, red and blue team.
Each team had 1000 knights and engineers.
Zecimoeds captained the red team and so did Elang with blue.
They fought so long, about 36 hours and The Garudas won that fight.
Elang successfully escaped the fight and left his army, but 3 months later he was found by one of the Garudas, hid inside a place called "Gowa" and was immediately brought to Zecimoeds.
Because of his kind and wise, Zecimoeds decided to not to kill him.
He cursed him into a Mouse and jailed him in a place called "Hell" forever.

After that victory, Zecimoeds felt really sad cause many people died in that battle.
Though all Eagles had been killed, Zecimoeds took all of the Eagles' feathers and threw them on to all of his armies' tombs.
All Garudas felt very happy, there would be no more victims from the Eagles.

That's the fairytale of <Garuda Indonesia>
What about your guild? :)
Leave comment pls, thank's so much for reading! :D

Arief Adhie M
06-07-2013, 01:20 AM
LoL, cursed you anymove ahahaha.
And you are the eagle :v
At last nice story.

Betulin ah inggrisnya wakaka :p

SliferSlayer
06-07-2013, 08:28 AM
I give you 3,5 out of 5 star anymove for this article :D
But arief right you must improve your grammar and vocabulary :p
However i like your article and Glory Glory "GARUDA INDONESIA" :chuncky:


P.S. : Im proud with you :loyal:

luluauliyah
06-09-2013, 06:11 AM
what a story, but two thumbs up for writing. nice imagination

rickhi edwardo
06-10-2013, 08:43 PM
Aduhh aing teu ngartos bahasa nya...
Please use indonesian language.
Proud to be Indonesian People

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