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Hodnett
11-28-2010, 07:01 PM
I need help for the haiku contest...which one do you think sounds better?

Pocket Legends, help!
Level fifty ones need cloths
Surely Droid will freeze


Pocket Legends, help!
Winter will make Droid cold too,
Please save his buns!


Pocket Legends, help!
Level fifty ones need cloths
Please save Droid's cold buns!


Pocket Legends, help!
Winter will make Droid cold too,
Frostbite left him nubs

Pharcyde
11-28-2010, 07:03 PM
The second one. Its not correct though the last line only has 4 syllables.

Hodnett
11-28-2010, 07:06 PM
OK I changed that one...

Hodnett
11-29-2010, 12:55 PM
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