Criticism needed! [AL Video Contest]

[Zeus]

Hey guys,

So, I need some criticism on the AL video contest. Yes, I'll post my entry here. I just wanted to know what the forum community thinks? Should I have some background music? More video effects? More comedic relief? Post your thoughts and opinions as well as what you liked on the video so I can improve on both my strengths and weaknesses!




https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dsOG6FdEhAY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dsOG6FdEhAY

[keikali]

Parf not bad, but I still like the one you did for PL? Not comedic enough IMO.

[bramer]

Some background music would be nice, maybe AL's theme song or something. Also, it seems a bit quiet, I can barely hear you some of the time. And, first like and view :p

[Zeus]

Some background music would be nice, maybe AL's theme song or something. Also, it seems a bit quiet, I can barely hear you some of the time. And, first like and view :p

Yeah, I was thinking the same thing. My first version of my PL one was terrible as well! I'll redit, throw some scenes out and do other stuff.

What do you think of the following:
• A crowded, more social scene
• Light music
• Better lighting

[Pie]

I like the beginning on the bus and beach and I think you should go to a public place but IMO. I think it's fine the way it is.

[Zeus]

I like the beginning on the bus and beach and I think you should go to a public place but IMO. I think it's fine the way it is.

It was a train, hehe. :D

And yeah, I'll seee what I can do. Thanks!

[bramer]

Yeah, go to a public place and show yourself ignoring other humans in favor of Al.

[keikali]

I told you Parf, go into your campus library, blast music and play AL. Ignore everyone else!

When they kick you out, thats when you quote Arcane Legends, lol.

[nelson131]

Nice and funny but add BACKGROUND MUSIC AND SPEAK LOUDER!

LIGHTING needs improvement too then you'll make a pro video.

[Zeus]

I turned down the volume in video editing because voice was too loud, but it seems I have to bump it up. :)

I'll reshoot the scenes in broad daylight & will add background music. :)

[Chihiro]

what your phone type? videos is so good compare others, hope you win the contest..

[moot]

put some pony in it.

[baddiva]

lol great!!

but at some point, it looks like toilet paper ads... i'd suggest remove the showing toilet paper part...

[aznnluvnit]

your commute with the beach and harbor, is like paradise pier, not sure if you want to add something like that

[Solid]

You need to ask Michael Bay to direct this for you,

[Madnex]

I'll tell you how to secure your win based on the dev way of thinking for half of that reward. ;)

[Zeus]

I'll tell you how to secure your win based on the dev way of thinking for half of that reward. ;)

Haha, PM me! :p

[Ihateppl]

go to the beach and start playing AL and pretend to step on a sting ray, and completely ignore it and keep on playing

[csyui]

Get a HD camrecorder. :adoration:

[Sorcerie]

There's not enough bling, money, or women twerking in it.

[Hercules]

If not a bit shy, would leave my imagination fly, perhaps being a child, I would go to many places to say where arcane legends game, I think you notice much in your house, you should go to a park, next to a bridge the river, from a viewpoint from the XD office, many ideas :D, ehehhee Zeus has told us where you the you spend more time :P, in sound, a good comic song would go well, some lighting is is all . luck on your video

[Commanderkeen]

Two words. Batman costume.

[Zojak]

Two words. Batman costume.

Keeeeeeeeeen! <3

[Pokidots]

Less seriousness but it was mad hilarious xD

Beatskipz FTW

[Commanderkeen]

Keeeeeeeeeen! <3

Hey bud :)

On topic, I liked it.

[Covert]

lol like you need CRITicism :smiley_simmons:

[Zeus]

How do y'all like this version? I updated it with my own music and new scenes!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7EeIdDru3k

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7EeIdDru3k

[Ebezaanec]

Hehe.. You need to go into an elevator and be that one guy who takes out his phone to avoid a conversation with others :p

[Zeus]

Hehe.. You need to go into an elevator and be that one guy who takes out his phone to avoid a conversation with others :p

You should've told me this before! It's too late now. -.-

[ctf]

Farming noises/Dropplets hitting the water would sound delightful imo.

[Promagin]

How do y'all like this version? I updated it with my own music and new scenes!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7EeIdDru3k

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7EeIdDru3k

I like it :)

[Anarchist]

LoL i wasn't expecting the toilet paper! Nice vid Zeus.

[keikali]

Better than the first version parf.

Still think you can do better. I told you man, campus library.

[Madnex]

Dude, I think you've left your hair dryer on at the last scene.


Of course I like the improved version more! :)

[Zeus]

Dude, I think you've left your hair dryer on at the last scene.


Of course I like the improved version more! :)

That's the bathroom fan. It turns on with the light and I tried to mute it as much as possible. :/

[Gameplay]

That's the bathroom fan. It turns on with the light and I tried to mute it as much as possible. :/


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qqkOqQYBVIE

[kurd4ever]

Need to smile more beside that is all good nice work