Pocket Legends Spotlight Entry, [NOT FINISHED]

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http://youtu.be/D-TLzzc5TfI


if that doesn't work then this one

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-TLzzc5TfI&feature=youtu.be



what do you guys think?

[SayCreed]

Awshum

[Nihiliste]

The Walking Dead returns this Sunday!

[Cheenivie]

Nice video! It's really cool.

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Thank you:) any constructive criticism?

[Fusionstrike]

Thank you:) any constructive criticism?

It's a good job overall.

You said it's not done yet, so you might already be planning to do some of these ideas. Here's what I think would help make it better.


The font for the title "Pocket Legends" is kind of small and looks more like it belongs on Star Legends, i.e. futuristic. I'd choose something closer to the fonts used in PL.
It could use a lot more gameplay clips and less text. You say awards, game studio, etc. but what's really going to make someone choose to play PL is the game itself, so show more of that.
All gameplay clips are of PvP. This makes it seem like that's all the game is. I'd get some clips showing PvE, especially lots of different maps. Alien Oasis, Lost Expedition, Swamps, Humania, Blacksmoke, etc. There are lots of interesting themes to show off.
Get some close-ups of lots of different character customizations. PL has tons of different looks with all its gear and vanities...more than most games. Showing that off would be good.
A clip of a team taking on a big, scary-looking boss would be good. Some cool looking bosses are red dragon, the Humania devil coast guy, the metallic golem in sand caves, vlod.

[Sheugokin]

Hello Shawn!

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Thank you:) any constructive criticism?

It's a good job overall.

You said it's not done yet, so you might already be planning to do some of these ideas. Here's what I think would help make it better.


The font for the title "Pocket Legends" is kind of small and looks more like it belongs on Star Legends, i.e. futuristic. I'd choose something closer to the fonts used in PL.
It could use a lot more gameplay clips and less text. You say awards, game studio, etc. but what's really going to make someone choose to play PL is the game itself, so show more of that.
All gameplay clips are of PvP. This makes it seem like that's all the game is. I'd get some clips showing PvE, especially lots of different maps. Alien Oasis, Lost Expedition, Swamps, Humania, Blacksmoke, etc. There are lots of interesting themes to show off.
Get some close-ups of lots of different character customizations. PL has tons of different looks with all its gear and vanities...more than most games. Showing that off would be good.
A clip of a team taking on a big, scary-looking boss would be good. Some cool looking bosses are red dragon, the Humania devil coast guy, the metallic golem in sand caves, vlod.


Thank you

I like bullets 1 and 2, but 3 and 4 are just to detailed...I need to be more general about the game. No time to fit every aspect of PL into a short video, 3-4 minutes is the max i'm keeping it. Maybe something like a few seconds of a clip showing each boss from campaigns.

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Hello Shawn!

Hi!