Epitaph Contest!

[ColdBlahd]

Is this any good guys? I asked Remiem if the Epitaph could be as if the NPC left like a final message or whatever, she said yes. Also in the Epitaph definition it does state something like that for one of its meanings.

Anyways, here it is:

IGN: Ozzy
NPC: Antee
Epitaph: R.I.P oh mother, oh mother. For i have been smothered. not by your hugs, but by these farming punk thugs. Hatch or sell eggs, please don't eat raw. Fly high bro Ribbit, and son Wrathjaw

[ColdBlahd]

I wanted to make it kinda funny, also make it so everyone would get the clues.

[ColdBlahd]

And i have already posted this long ago, so stealing it is out of the question. I just want feedback, thanks.

[ColdBlahd]

Still looking for some feedback :)

[Dex Scene]

?? Our feedback on your epitaph which gonna be judged by stg teams is meaningless. Anyway good epitaph. Im sure mine is better than yours tho.
And anyone participating in the contest would have same thinking about their own :) good luck

[Xeusx]

Spamming is not allowed, you should entry in that contest.

[ColdBlahd]

?? Our feedback on your epitaph which gonna be judged by stg teams is meaningless. Anyway good epitaph. Im sure mine is better than yours tho.
And anyone participating in the contest would have same thinking about their own :) good luck
Okay thanks, i was just simply making sure it wasn't horrible.

[ColdBlahd]

Well contest is locked, so it is what it is i guess, lol.

[obee]

Be confident lol, feedback is good, but have some self-confidence. Don't always use what other people think

[ColdBlahd]

Be confident lol, feedback is good, but have some self-confidence. Don't always use what other people think
I know, i use my own stuff, and i wasn't going to change anything. Just hoping i have a chance to win this thannnnggg! :)

[obee]

I know, i use my own stuff, and i wasn't going to change anything. Just hoping i have a chance to win this thannnnggg! :)

I meant use your own belief on what you think about it

[ColdBlahd]

I meant use your own belief on what you think about it
Well i do think it's pretty clever and funny, also rhymes. So yeah, i believe i did good.