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Tengotengo
03-06-2011, 04:53 PM
Siekel stood up and dusted off his leathers, checked his auto-bow, and straightened the feather in his cap. "Maybe it's time to grow up and find a stable job" he though to himself, as the glitz of being a bandit was wearing out rapidly.

It must have been the zombie invasion that brought him to this low state, he pondered; his cousin's trading company overrun by the shambling dead. He fled the family perch and took shelter in the sewers, where he became a thug for the bandits that had called the sewers their home for years.

Unfortunately, since Balefort Castle's siege and subsequent rescue by the dubious presence of a horde of mercenaries, freebooters, and self-proclaimed "heroes", the bandit trade foundered and shriveled. It's much harder to shakedown a hearty and well-armed group of sociopaths than it is a weary and frightened traveler who took a wrong turn.

Now he stood guard over the chest that contained a set of false documents, meant to lead the swarms of crazies who ran free in the sewers, regularly barely hearing the explosions and screams before the rolling juggernaut of sparks and glittering armor bore down on him and pummeled him into unconsciousness. only to do it again in a handful of minutes as a different group swooped through and did the same.

"I wonder if Hawken is accepting applications?" he mumbled, as the hallway around the corner burst into bright colors and guttural bellowing.

TwinkTastical
03-06-2011, 04:58 PM
Well done.
/+1

Major
03-06-2011, 05:00 PM
Haha awesome story....hate those firetraps lol

Militaryman
03-06-2011, 05:05 PM
Haha epic +yo mama

Moogerfooger
03-06-2011, 05:07 PM
I always kinda felt bad for that one bird bandit by that chest. And Catspaw. How many times has she gotten clobbered?

giayuan
03-06-2011, 05:09 PM
Nice man! +1

gnardog666
03-06-2011, 05:12 PM
awesome love it

Survivorfan
03-06-2011, 05:56 PM
Cool story!

Frenzyn
03-06-2011, 05:58 PM
You should write a short novel of the whole story of the world of alterra
i would buy it, since i don't have a good job at seeing the quests in my mind, and this made my mind go, "wow"
+1

Survivorfan
03-06-2011, 05:59 PM
You should write a short novel of the whole story of the world of alterra
i would buy it, since i don't have a good job at seeing the quests in my mind, and this made my mind go, "wow"
+1
I agree, this would make a good book

Cmandial
03-06-2011, 06:13 PM
I'm not gonna lie, that was very entertaining

nbaallamerican
03-06-2011, 06:19 PM
Very well written. Are you a writer?

Yvonnel
03-06-2011, 06:21 PM
Nice. Very nice.

DawnInfinity
03-06-2011, 06:53 PM
That was really good and well-written.

Tengotengo
03-06-2011, 06:59 PM
I dabble. I have various story seeds kicking around, but I don't enjoy the methodical process of writing it all down, I guess. I'd rather spend all day pondering, back-engineering, and building

I think I may do this regularly; toss together a small narrative. Maybe I can patch together an actual story from it! We'll see what the devs say.

Frenzyn
03-06-2011, 07:41 PM
keep this topic alive guys, keep responding i want to see a book come from this :)

Tengotengo
03-07-2011, 03:16 AM
Does anyone have a suggestion for another little thing about a random NPC or mob?