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Frenzyn
03-13-2011, 12:29 AM
Life is about trial and effort, i decided to make a new version from
What some opinions were, shown here:

"Do some creative cropping. I'm an art education major who stopped short of a teaching cred because I was planning on an MFA. Life happens, I guess."
"The colors are Ok. Don't really like the smudging/liquidating (or whatever you did) coming off of the F. Also looks kind of washed out."
"I say remove one of the bottom F layers, it kinda makes it too strong on depth.
Then for the texture on the F, add some randomness to the patterns. Right now the flow is low on it.
Then I would recommend upping the opacity on the main F layer.
Lastly, I think only the main F layer should have any textured effects. The two bottom F layer effects make it too cluttered.
Of course that is just my opinion though, the style is good."

I applaud you guys for saying that to me, for it gave me the inspiration to make a version 2.

v2:
http://www.ffxhost.net/uploads/files/47/frenzyn3.png
http://www.ffxhost.net/uploads/files/47/frenzyn3.png

v1:
http://www.ffxhost.net/uploads/files/47/frenzyn2.png
http://spencerimbleau.deviantart.com/art/Got-bored-200749519
Zipponator
03-13-2011, 12:34 AM
I like the contrast of colours .... But i dont know what it is or whats happening.
Frenzyn
03-13-2011, 12:37 AM
I like the contrast of colours .... But i dont know what it is or whats happening.

to be honest thats why i was bored when i did it. lol....
Its just an F for frenzyn :o my name... and i wanted to try this style my friend does.
DawnInfinity
03-13-2011, 01:17 AM
That looks really cool. I like the colors a lot. :)
Conradin
03-13-2011, 01:25 AM
Seriously join aeo- you could be a desIgn specialist.
Frenzyn
03-13-2011, 01:54 AM
Seriously join aeo- you could be a desIgn specialist.

Forgive me if i look stupid, but what is AEO?

Edit: Well, it seems they have 2 designers there, anyways. i don't think i have a place if i even applied, but thanks for asking.
Keohike
03-13-2011, 02:18 AM
looks good, but yes the F is kinda confusing, maybe add your full name?
Tengotengo
03-13-2011, 02:33 AM
Do some creative cropping. I'm an art education major who stopped short of a teaching cred because I was planning on an MFA. Life happens, I guess.
Rebel
03-13-2011, 10:08 AM
The colors are Ok. Don't really like the smudging/liquidating (or whatever you did) coming off of the F. Also looks kind of washed out.
Pharcyde
03-13-2011, 12:14 PM
I say remove one of the bottom F layers, it kinda makes it too strong on depth.

Then for the texture on the F, add some randomness to the patterns. Right now the flow is low on it.

Then I would recommend upping the opacity on the main F layer.

Lastly, I think only the main F layer should have any textured effects. The two bottom F layer effects make it too cluttered.

Of course that is just my opinion though, the style is good.
Frenzyn
03-13-2011, 03:12 PM
v2 Added! i tried to use some of your comments to help towards that. opinions please. :)
KingFu
03-13-2011, 03:20 PM
I like it, looks cool and creative, I'd just like to see a bit more color, it all seems to blend together:)
Rebel
03-13-2011, 03:39 PM
V2: I can hardly tell what the entire project is supposed to be. I like V1 better. You took way to many parts of the F out, making it too abstract. Also, make the opacity higher for the F. It will make it stand out more, thus creating a more focused effect. I liked the dripping off of the F, but not really liking that texturing in V2. Keep going though.
KingFu
03-13-2011, 03:56 PM
Also, on V1 I like the layering a lot. Looks like you took it out for V2