HeyitsTubs
09-01-2015, 04:13 PM
I know its too late.... but still... i put so much ******* time into this i really should've won? any support?
Entry 2:
Metaphorical Dilemma
And we played . I drew
On asphalt circles, squares , diamonds
Crayons , and we sat each
In its geometric figure ,
Not to dare
We walk out of invisible walls
in the,
forest,
we fight
And we began to look at.
Each other , and then in groups,
And we have not moved,
the lag froze us,
I still managed to collect us,
through closing some tabs,
to reduce lag.
In small groups , have increased.
And of white and blue and green lines
that the mini-map produced,
because
no,
one, wants to get lost in the depths of
the
mega maze.
We had war , because
That's our mission right?
I've spent some time to play ,
And even addict myself to pixelated life
distinctly pocket legends.
a true legend.
But as i arose from my,
Computer Chair, ,
I saw God,
Alone, in a sphere .
The letter and makeup
And some mountains are among us
such as,
almighty Mount Fang.
Folders , closed , sad fences
Nor yet to come then
In winter absolute threshold
Kiss my white temple , let the emotion go
And then dive down and go
In another speech horizon...
but wait,
Oh No
there is no horizon.
Oh No!
Its all covered in snow,
Oh No!
Elsa put up a nasty show!
Oh No!
She just let it all Go!
Oh Yes, she can be saved,
and then the roads shall be paved.
And the town of Arrendale,
Will be as happy as Chip and Dale.
I can not tell you anything
See you or goodbye
Appeared , not only to you farewell .
Why do you say goodbye ?
We had so much fun,
We played together,
We made snowmen,
We Laughed,
We Enjoyed Life,
But now,
You hide,
Behind,
the Door.
I would not have any reason
"Farewell " rights
After all you are the queen - and ask
As I lost definitely .
And from me to you
The word itself will freeze. Eternally.
No you do not know well shout
My beloved , my lost .
When I last saw
You knew and you, cry and you
And you left with all the station
No there was no train , no.
I was back again
I wanted to come off of you,
but then you rushed me.
But where the railway
It's like someone took it .
I would tell you details
Destiny would be to change
My girlfriend over the mountains
My girlfriend over time.
By the time I will not find you again,
Ill be dead
Under nuclear cynical goodbye
__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________
P.SOver the past 5 days, i have worked on this poem for an average of 5 hours a day, to perfect the grammar, poem structure, and the hear touching aspect of it.
I have even went as far as to ask the writing clinician at my school to check it out and conference with me. (lol, i didnt tell her what it was for. If i did, she would be like W.T.F.) hehe, anyways, she gave me tips on parts of it.
Now, you might have several thoughts running through your mind as you read this poem...
1. How could a 14 year old gamer right something as 'deep' as this?
Answer:Thats because im a genius :D MUHAHAHAHAHA! No, jk. The moral of it all is that if you take the time to put in your ultimate effort in anything, it will pay off. This not only applies to what ive written but it also applies to pl itself and Life. I dont think ill be needing to explain that.
2. Did i plagiarize this? (answer: No. This is 100% original.)
3. Your story doesn't make any sense? Are you gay or what? (due to talking about lvlone being a girlfriend, or any other confusing parts of the poem) (Answer: I am 100% straight, the girlfriend part is a symbolic term a good similie to describe this is this " LevelOne was famous and well known and thought of in pocket legends, as a boyfriend cares and is devoted to his girlfriend
4. How does this have anything to do with pocket legends/and/or frozen.
Here is my explanation: The correlation can be found in the extensive poem. I highlighted a few key terms to help you understand it more efficiently. As you can see, i never included the term "Pocket legends" in the whole poem... Why? This is because a term like that wouldn't fit in rhythmically. (however it can be inferred.)
5. Some parts are pretty confusing? I dont get it!!??
Answer: Here are some parts that may be confusing:
1:
When I last saw
You knew and you, cry and you
And you left with all the station
No there was no train , no.
I was back again
I wanted to come off of you,
but then you rushed me.
But where the railway
It's like someone took it .
I think you did understand the relationship of "come off of u" (in pl if someone is having lag in a fight they will say 'off'.)
However you might still be wondering what the whole train thing was about.
Explanation: When i said you left with the station, but the train never came because there was no railway, it is a "play with words" meaning that you cannot accomplish something without the essentials. (you cannot ride in a train when there is no railway, or no foundation.
Now, how does this relate to pl?
Explanation: The best way of explaining this is through an example:
Lets say that you are in a pvp arena with another guy that is the same class, and has the same exact gear and build as you.
The train stanza works here perfectly because in this pvp fight, the player with the better foundation or skill will win.
__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ___________________
Inner Message:
Before i wrap it all up, i just wanted to end up by saying that "In my opinion, there are three key terms in order to succeed in life.
1. You need to motivate yourself (In this case, I motivated myself to create this for the good of the community, and yeah, i cant deny it, FOR THE TOP PRIZE WOOT WOOT!!! I HOPE IVE EARNED IT !!! P.S 2nd>>><<< I hope im not begging>>>>"
2. You need persevere through the tough parts of life ( in this case i perservered in the making of the poem. Ill tell straightforward It aint easy!
3. You need to Love what you intend to do. No Comment.
This now concludes my entry i hope.
Sorry for the grammatical errors along the way or any other issues
(If you have any more questions regarding my entry or need any clarification of any stanza, give me a buzz, Oh, wait, thats personal information, Sorry mom. Hehe, anyway i really hoped you liked it and consider me a worthy candidate for the Grand Prize of Over 20m worth of Stuff!
Please take the time to like the thanks button to show support for my entry! (now fully edited.)
Now that it is edited, there are a lot of twists and turns and tone changes. However, I'm happy i changed it because now, instead of it being 100% deep and "Shakespeare like", i added some humor:chuncky::chuncky::chuncky::chuncky::chuncky: :chuncky::chuncky: into it which gives it a unique twist enjoy!
GG ALL.
Its seems that i will never truly finish this post. Ugh.
After all, Assignments are never done, only due!
After reading some posts below me, i found out about imgur.com!! Its a truly amazing sight,
Below, these are some Original Memes i created through imgur ( the meme pics are through imgur, the text is original, made by me,
I will keep thinking of more and posting them here enjoy.
These don't really have any relation to pl/frozen, i just thought they'd provide some comic relief from the deep head scratching poem :P
http://i.imgur.com/McixPts.png
http://i.imgur.com/GdsBX04.png
http://i.imgur.com/rKk2OA2.png
http://i.imgur.com/R6xzaxf.png
http://i.imgur.com/HBBhYuH.png
http://i.imgur.com/23pseio.png
http://i.imgur.com/RC381vF.png
Now, moving on, the last part of my entry will consist of a list of my own 100% original created Aphorisms.
As i was brainstorming for this contest, I thought to myself... "What would be most meaningful for level one.
I thought, ah! Why not create some aphorisms that would lend a piece of mind into whatever profession you decide to delve into in the real world!
Genius!
(I also included correlations to pl/frozen beneath *most of the aphorisms*)((Some are just to true to be messed around with.))
Here we go enjoy:
1. Friends are like money. You take them for granted until you really need them.
Real Life Contribution: Sometimes, you may have friends that really support you and think of you as their role model. However, in return, you don't feel the same way. To be exact, you take advantage of them and you make them do things that you could do, but your laziness obstructs you from doing so. However, when the time comes when they are needed for something other than personal gain, (had a bad day at work, problem with car;asking them to pick you up etc) they start to reject you, because your intention is to benefit from them, not benefit together.
Frozen Relationship: In Frozen, Prince Hans's and Anna's relationship wasn't an act of true love.... Prince Han's real motivation of desiring Anna was due to her social status, and not her personality (Princess + Prince == success, unlike the traditional>> (Personality + Looks = success) This relates to the above aphorism because they took each other for their money, and when Anna was in danger, Han's wasn't extremely eager to help.
Pocket legends Relationship: Sometimes in Pocket legends, you try to become friends with someone in-game not because of how they help you out when you need it, or if you ask politely to be lvled, they will accept, but because of the millions they behold. This aphorism does not connect as deeply in the virtual world, but nevertheless, an individual should become friends based on how assertive a player is, and not because in the end, you will make the cliche remark "Hey man, could you give me 5m or so? After all 5 m is like <1% of your total income..."
2. [B]You have to dig deep to see people's true beauty.
Real Life Contribution: I think the most creative answer to this would be if you work in a big business, and there are a lot of 'ranks'/hierarchies. I know the feeling of this because my dad is a IT Support/Programmer, and there are a lot of ranks and positions. "Every Boss, has another Boss." He told me that his Boss was very mean and had very high expectations. In other words, from the outside, he looked like a mean-green-mankilling-machine, however, the more my father was around him, the more they got used to each other, the mean-green...yeah you know the rest, they laughed together and had a good time.
Frozen Relationship: In the Movie Frozen, Han's and Kristoff both liked Anna, but for two very different reasons!
Hans liked Anna based on her status, nothing more, while Kristoff dug through the ice to find Anna's true beauty not in her status, but in her easy-going personality and obviously good looks WOOT WOOT.
The life message i am trying to reach out here is that no matter if it is a girl, a job, a person, a hobby... they all have a true beauty. Some inner beauty's lay on the first inch of snow, while others must be dug up from very, very deep depths to be acquired.
3. Life is like a Videogame. Some levels are hard, some levels are easy, but none of them last forever.
Real Life Contribution: Statistics show that an average individual runs into about 10 problems a day. That may seem like a lot, but it really isn't because they all differ in intensity. Most of those 10 issues consist of forgetting a pencil, forgetting your car keys in the house.... etc.) However, other times some levels are hard because you could run into some bigger problems such as losing your job, losing your wife XD, losing your good health etc. However, the moral of it all is that these are all just levels, not constants. None of them last forever, they can all be overcome.
Frozen Relationship: In frozen, when Elsa and Anna were young, they would always play together and had a good time. In other words, that level of their lives was easy. But then, after their parents died, and Elsa's power became stronger, she held back from Anna, and Anna went through a very difficult part of life. However, they both found happiness in the end.
Pocket Legends Relationship: In pocket legends dungeons vary in difficulty! If you have a lvl 77 clearing through forest haven, what an easy level that was! However, If you have a level 77 going through Ancient Caverns, now that is a much more difficult level to defeat, especially by yourself. However, none of them last forever. Even if they take 30 seconds, or 30 minutes, they can all still be defeated, none of them last forever.
4. Life is like a ladder. There is a top, a bottom, and rungs to climb to take you higher.
Real Life Contribution: In life, you always start from the bottom and climb your way up the ranks. (Unless you have a super rich family, and inherit 40 billion dollars XD!!)
Anyways, all kidding aside, there is a ladder in any business, or career you wish to pursue. However, its not awarded like the pl system 1 year = manager, 2 years = CFO , 3 years CEO!!! Nah.. you wish! As i mentioned in my poem, you get promoted through the effort and contribution you bring to the table. Sometimes you may be at the 5th rung of a ladder, but then you fall. But remember, that ladder is always going to be there. Keep trying. Get to the top.
Frozen Relationship: Frozen is another great example of this. For all who watched the movie, you know that there is a big hierarchy. In this case, the bottom of the ladder would be an average citizen, (such as Kristoff), and the top of the ladder would be the almighty king or queen.
Pocket legends Relationship: In Pocket legends, a lvl 1 char is at the bottom, and a 77 is at the top. So how does this ladder theory work? Well, everyone starts at the bottom, (you never start at lvl 35 for instance) and they work their way up through persevering through the boring PvE arena's, up to the top? Occasionally, you could get spammed, and you have to start over. But once again, if you put in the hard work, you will rise up.
Here is my most valued words of wisdom. I will not add relationships for the movie and game since it will be better understood without.
5. There is no dictionary definition of Life. You have to write your own one for it.
__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____________________________________________
I hope that you find happiness in your life, whatever that may be. Good Luck my friend.
And Remember: "May the odds be ever in your favor."
****Finalized**** ~January 22, 2015~
Entry 2:
Metaphorical Dilemma
And we played . I drew
On asphalt circles, squares , diamonds
Crayons , and we sat each
In its geometric figure ,
Not to dare
We walk out of invisible walls
in the,
forest,
we fight
And we began to look at.
Each other , and then in groups,
And we have not moved,
the lag froze us,
I still managed to collect us,
through closing some tabs,
to reduce lag.
In small groups , have increased.
And of white and blue and green lines
that the mini-map produced,
because
no,
one, wants to get lost in the depths of
the
mega maze.
We had war , because
That's our mission right?
I've spent some time to play ,
And even addict myself to pixelated life
distinctly pocket legends.
a true legend.
But as i arose from my,
Computer Chair, ,
I saw God,
Alone, in a sphere .
The letter and makeup
And some mountains are among us
such as,
almighty Mount Fang.
Folders , closed , sad fences
Nor yet to come then
In winter absolute threshold
Kiss my white temple , let the emotion go
And then dive down and go
In another speech horizon...
but wait,
Oh No
there is no horizon.
Oh No!
Its all covered in snow,
Oh No!
Elsa put up a nasty show!
Oh No!
She just let it all Go!
Oh Yes, she can be saved,
and then the roads shall be paved.
And the town of Arrendale,
Will be as happy as Chip and Dale.
I can not tell you anything
See you or goodbye
Appeared , not only to you farewell .
Why do you say goodbye ?
We had so much fun,
We played together,
We made snowmen,
We Laughed,
We Enjoyed Life,
But now,
You hide,
Behind,
the Door.
I would not have any reason
"Farewell " rights
After all you are the queen - and ask
As I lost definitely .
And from me to you
The word itself will freeze. Eternally.
No you do not know well shout
My beloved , my lost .
When I last saw
You knew and you, cry and you
And you left with all the station
No there was no train , no.
I was back again
I wanted to come off of you,
but then you rushed me.
But where the railway
It's like someone took it .
I would tell you details
Destiny would be to change
My girlfriend over the mountains
My girlfriend over time.
By the time I will not find you again,
Ill be dead
Under nuclear cynical goodbye
__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________
P.SOver the past 5 days, i have worked on this poem for an average of 5 hours a day, to perfect the grammar, poem structure, and the hear touching aspect of it.
I have even went as far as to ask the writing clinician at my school to check it out and conference with me. (lol, i didnt tell her what it was for. If i did, she would be like W.T.F.) hehe, anyways, she gave me tips on parts of it.
Now, you might have several thoughts running through your mind as you read this poem...
1. How could a 14 year old gamer right something as 'deep' as this?
Answer:Thats because im a genius :D MUHAHAHAHAHA! No, jk. The moral of it all is that if you take the time to put in your ultimate effort in anything, it will pay off. This not only applies to what ive written but it also applies to pl itself and Life. I dont think ill be needing to explain that.
2. Did i plagiarize this? (answer: No. This is 100% original.)
3. Your story doesn't make any sense? Are you gay or what? (due to talking about lvlone being a girlfriend, or any other confusing parts of the poem) (Answer: I am 100% straight, the girlfriend part is a symbolic term a good similie to describe this is this " LevelOne was famous and well known and thought of in pocket legends, as a boyfriend cares and is devoted to his girlfriend
4. How does this have anything to do with pocket legends/and/or frozen.
Here is my explanation: The correlation can be found in the extensive poem. I highlighted a few key terms to help you understand it more efficiently. As you can see, i never included the term "Pocket legends" in the whole poem... Why? This is because a term like that wouldn't fit in rhythmically. (however it can be inferred.)
5. Some parts are pretty confusing? I dont get it!!??
Answer: Here are some parts that may be confusing:
1:
When I last saw
You knew and you, cry and you
And you left with all the station
No there was no train , no.
I was back again
I wanted to come off of you,
but then you rushed me.
But where the railway
It's like someone took it .
I think you did understand the relationship of "come off of u" (in pl if someone is having lag in a fight they will say 'off'.)
However you might still be wondering what the whole train thing was about.
Explanation: When i said you left with the station, but the train never came because there was no railway, it is a "play with words" meaning that you cannot accomplish something without the essentials. (you cannot ride in a train when there is no railway, or no foundation.
Now, how does this relate to pl?
Explanation: The best way of explaining this is through an example:
Lets say that you are in a pvp arena with another guy that is the same class, and has the same exact gear and build as you.
The train stanza works here perfectly because in this pvp fight, the player with the better foundation or skill will win.
__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ___________________
Inner Message:
Before i wrap it all up, i just wanted to end up by saying that "In my opinion, there are three key terms in order to succeed in life.
1. You need to motivate yourself (In this case, I motivated myself to create this for the good of the community, and yeah, i cant deny it, FOR THE TOP PRIZE WOOT WOOT!!! I HOPE IVE EARNED IT !!! P.S 2nd>>><<< I hope im not begging>>>>"
2. You need persevere through the tough parts of life ( in this case i perservered in the making of the poem. Ill tell straightforward It aint easy!
3. You need to Love what you intend to do. No Comment.
This now concludes my entry i hope.
Sorry for the grammatical errors along the way or any other issues
(If you have any more questions regarding my entry or need any clarification of any stanza, give me a buzz, Oh, wait, thats personal information, Sorry mom. Hehe, anyway i really hoped you liked it and consider me a worthy candidate for the Grand Prize of Over 20m worth of Stuff!
Please take the time to like the thanks button to show support for my entry! (now fully edited.)
Now that it is edited, there are a lot of twists and turns and tone changes. However, I'm happy i changed it because now, instead of it being 100% deep and "Shakespeare like", i added some humor:chuncky::chuncky::chuncky::chuncky::chuncky: :chuncky::chuncky: into it which gives it a unique twist enjoy!
GG ALL.
Its seems that i will never truly finish this post. Ugh.
After all, Assignments are never done, only due!
After reading some posts below me, i found out about imgur.com!! Its a truly amazing sight,
Below, these are some Original Memes i created through imgur ( the meme pics are through imgur, the text is original, made by me,
I will keep thinking of more and posting them here enjoy.
These don't really have any relation to pl/frozen, i just thought they'd provide some comic relief from the deep head scratching poem :P
http://i.imgur.com/McixPts.png
http://i.imgur.com/GdsBX04.png
http://i.imgur.com/rKk2OA2.png
http://i.imgur.com/R6xzaxf.png
http://i.imgur.com/HBBhYuH.png
http://i.imgur.com/23pseio.png
http://i.imgur.com/RC381vF.png
Now, moving on, the last part of my entry will consist of a list of my own 100% original created Aphorisms.
As i was brainstorming for this contest, I thought to myself... "What would be most meaningful for level one.
I thought, ah! Why not create some aphorisms that would lend a piece of mind into whatever profession you decide to delve into in the real world!
Genius!
(I also included correlations to pl/frozen beneath *most of the aphorisms*)((Some are just to true to be messed around with.))
Here we go enjoy:
1. Friends are like money. You take them for granted until you really need them.
Real Life Contribution: Sometimes, you may have friends that really support you and think of you as their role model. However, in return, you don't feel the same way. To be exact, you take advantage of them and you make them do things that you could do, but your laziness obstructs you from doing so. However, when the time comes when they are needed for something other than personal gain, (had a bad day at work, problem with car;asking them to pick you up etc) they start to reject you, because your intention is to benefit from them, not benefit together.
Frozen Relationship: In Frozen, Prince Hans's and Anna's relationship wasn't an act of true love.... Prince Han's real motivation of desiring Anna was due to her social status, and not her personality (Princess + Prince == success, unlike the traditional>> (Personality + Looks = success) This relates to the above aphorism because they took each other for their money, and when Anna was in danger, Han's wasn't extremely eager to help.
Pocket legends Relationship: Sometimes in Pocket legends, you try to become friends with someone in-game not because of how they help you out when you need it, or if you ask politely to be lvled, they will accept, but because of the millions they behold. This aphorism does not connect as deeply in the virtual world, but nevertheless, an individual should become friends based on how assertive a player is, and not because in the end, you will make the cliche remark "Hey man, could you give me 5m or so? After all 5 m is like <1% of your total income..."
2. [B]You have to dig deep to see people's true beauty.
Real Life Contribution: I think the most creative answer to this would be if you work in a big business, and there are a lot of 'ranks'/hierarchies. I know the feeling of this because my dad is a IT Support/Programmer, and there are a lot of ranks and positions. "Every Boss, has another Boss." He told me that his Boss was very mean and had very high expectations. In other words, from the outside, he looked like a mean-green-mankilling-machine, however, the more my father was around him, the more they got used to each other, the mean-green...yeah you know the rest, they laughed together and had a good time.
Frozen Relationship: In the Movie Frozen, Han's and Kristoff both liked Anna, but for two very different reasons!
Hans liked Anna based on her status, nothing more, while Kristoff dug through the ice to find Anna's true beauty not in her status, but in her easy-going personality and obviously good looks WOOT WOOT.
The life message i am trying to reach out here is that no matter if it is a girl, a job, a person, a hobby... they all have a true beauty. Some inner beauty's lay on the first inch of snow, while others must be dug up from very, very deep depths to be acquired.
3. Life is like a Videogame. Some levels are hard, some levels are easy, but none of them last forever.
Real Life Contribution: Statistics show that an average individual runs into about 10 problems a day. That may seem like a lot, but it really isn't because they all differ in intensity. Most of those 10 issues consist of forgetting a pencil, forgetting your car keys in the house.... etc.) However, other times some levels are hard because you could run into some bigger problems such as losing your job, losing your wife XD, losing your good health etc. However, the moral of it all is that these are all just levels, not constants. None of them last forever, they can all be overcome.
Frozen Relationship: In frozen, when Elsa and Anna were young, they would always play together and had a good time. In other words, that level of their lives was easy. But then, after their parents died, and Elsa's power became stronger, she held back from Anna, and Anna went through a very difficult part of life. However, they both found happiness in the end.
Pocket Legends Relationship: In pocket legends dungeons vary in difficulty! If you have a lvl 77 clearing through forest haven, what an easy level that was! However, If you have a level 77 going through Ancient Caverns, now that is a much more difficult level to defeat, especially by yourself. However, none of them last forever. Even if they take 30 seconds, or 30 minutes, they can all still be defeated, none of them last forever.
4. Life is like a ladder. There is a top, a bottom, and rungs to climb to take you higher.
Real Life Contribution: In life, you always start from the bottom and climb your way up the ranks. (Unless you have a super rich family, and inherit 40 billion dollars XD!!)
Anyways, all kidding aside, there is a ladder in any business, or career you wish to pursue. However, its not awarded like the pl system 1 year = manager, 2 years = CFO , 3 years CEO!!! Nah.. you wish! As i mentioned in my poem, you get promoted through the effort and contribution you bring to the table. Sometimes you may be at the 5th rung of a ladder, but then you fall. But remember, that ladder is always going to be there. Keep trying. Get to the top.
Frozen Relationship: Frozen is another great example of this. For all who watched the movie, you know that there is a big hierarchy. In this case, the bottom of the ladder would be an average citizen, (such as Kristoff), and the top of the ladder would be the almighty king or queen.
Pocket legends Relationship: In Pocket legends, a lvl 1 char is at the bottom, and a 77 is at the top. So how does this ladder theory work? Well, everyone starts at the bottom, (you never start at lvl 35 for instance) and they work their way up through persevering through the boring PvE arena's, up to the top? Occasionally, you could get spammed, and you have to start over. But once again, if you put in the hard work, you will rise up.
Here is my most valued words of wisdom. I will not add relationships for the movie and game since it will be better understood without.
5. There is no dictionary definition of Life. You have to write your own one for it.
__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____________________________________________
I hope that you find happiness in your life, whatever that may be. Good Luck my friend.
And Remember: "May the odds be ever in your favor."
****Finalized**** ~January 22, 2015~