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Aidanwolfe
11-14-2011, 01:08 AM
I sat waiting at forest haven for my buddy Wolfdah. He was never good with time. As I waited I thought to my self the wonders of being a level 61. How it felt to have over a million coins and to get pink drops everyday. I then opened my pack to see that I only have one hundred and twenty coins. I closed my pack and sat on the cold barren boulder. Then I saw Wolfedah peer out of the tree. " Panderos?"said Wolfedah. "No it's a enchantress, obviously it's me." Wolfedah didn't look very pleased with me. We set off into the forest encountering zombies and evil witches. I did mange to level up but no pinks. I finished my day with only a new banded shield and a rusted axe. I had twenty potions left of mana an health but tomorrow was another day. Till tomorrow time to rest.


Hope you liked!
Give me feed back and if should continue.
Also leave ideas to add to the story.

Skeletonlord
11-14-2011, 01:40 AM
I like this story. You should definately make another chapter. It draws you in right from the beginning. Fantastic story!
You could to make the story more exiting is the next time you get loads of pinks and you sell them and make lots of gold!

Wretch
11-14-2011, 01:41 AM
One complaint....



Why did you stop?

Wretch
11-14-2011, 01:42 AM
Edit: dang phone sorry....

Aidanwolfe
11-14-2011, 06:20 AM
Thanks for feed back I'll post chapter two later.

Fatpigwarrior
11-14-2011, 06:23 AM
All the stories are awesome I love yours best!!!

I'm gonna write my own in computer then post on here!

Aidanwolfe
11-14-2011, 06:40 AM
Thanks and go for it!

Fatpigwarrior
11-14-2011, 06:59 AM
I've made one check it out!

Aidanwolfe
11-14-2011, 07:05 AM
I did pretty cool.

PatsoeGamer
11-14-2011, 08:19 AM
Nice little story keep them coming :D

Aikiebo
11-14-2011, 11:45 AM
One complaint....



Why did you stop?

Yeah!! Please continue! Real nice story. Thanks for sharing.