WoundedEagle
12-01-2011, 03:33 PM
Since I have more suggestions than bugs, I will just make one thread:
First of All:
Tiny Chat, for me on iPhone 4, iOS5.
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/97ab6276.jpg
I think spam is a harsh word, I would say ask:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/d98b46dd.jpg
Already on the Menu so it should just say [Store]:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/1ce10fbc.jpg
I wouldn't use the word, "Allocate" I would just say "Move" Or "Rearrange" or "Position":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/9e3b4716.jpg
Whats a Gemstone Proc?
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/c68deedc.jpg
I would just say "Strategy":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/1799f856.jpg
I think this should say "Spawn":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/0dacd09e.jpg
Should say "Tap the [Store] Icon to purchase Platinum"
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/f3375c8c.jpg
The button now reads "Mute", not "Ignore":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/edf30a5f.jpg
YouTube Allows Icon use? Just looking out and the URL cuts off:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/ec3dc193.jpg
I would consider revision as it looks like one sentence and is read awkwardly:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/6a8e5b7b.jpg
I would say, "Concentrate on killing the minions before attacking the Boss":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/691679a4.jpg
"Cog" Is a weird word for that sentence, I would say "Settings" or "Shield":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/cfdb218c.jpg
All of these don't state how to use the command, I would put "Type (Command whatever it may be) in the chat bar to......":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/be60a54e.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/a92bbf06.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/01373572.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/7b87a255.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/01373572.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/227b1598.jpg
Text cut off:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/42045de3.jpg
I would consider removing the word "Keep":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/9b60ead1.jpg
This should say "Bear Tip" instead of just "Tip":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/9425151e.jpg
Possibly spell out "Experience" rather than "XP"?:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/f3b97445.jpg
I believe you don't need your mouse and can use keys, no?:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/b06fbaee.jpg
We can't friend PL on Facebook, but we can Like :) This may be nothing just a suggestion is all:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/00b8bbc2.jpg
I wouldn't say "From your" I would say "In" or consider revising:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/47ddbc28.jpg
This sentence confused me at first, consider revising:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/5c349c36.jpg
Also,
-I didn't see a Slide about PL on Google Chrome
-Something explaining what the trade Icons look like would be nice
-"Alien Oasis II Plasma Pyramid drops lots of gold." Would be a cool slide.
-Explain what Platinum is.
Also, I get a sound of a cash register when I log out.
Although a lot of people on here are going to 'frown' upon me and say "I didn't know you were an english major, /sarcastic", I'll say in advance that it's the little things that make the game smoother and more welcoming to newer players.
-we
First of All:
Tiny Chat, for me on iPhone 4, iOS5.
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/97ab6276.jpg
I think spam is a harsh word, I would say ask:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/d98b46dd.jpg
Already on the Menu so it should just say [Store]:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/1ce10fbc.jpg
I wouldn't use the word, "Allocate" I would just say "Move" Or "Rearrange" or "Position":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/9e3b4716.jpg
Whats a Gemstone Proc?
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/c68deedc.jpg
I would just say "Strategy":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/1799f856.jpg
I think this should say "Spawn":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/0dacd09e.jpg
Should say "Tap the [Store] Icon to purchase Platinum"
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/f3375c8c.jpg
The button now reads "Mute", not "Ignore":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/edf30a5f.jpg
YouTube Allows Icon use? Just looking out and the URL cuts off:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/ec3dc193.jpg
I would consider revision as it looks like one sentence and is read awkwardly:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/6a8e5b7b.jpg
I would say, "Concentrate on killing the minions before attacking the Boss":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/691679a4.jpg
"Cog" Is a weird word for that sentence, I would say "Settings" or "Shield":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/cfdb218c.jpg
All of these don't state how to use the command, I would put "Type (Command whatever it may be) in the chat bar to......":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/be60a54e.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/a92bbf06.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/01373572.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/7b87a255.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/01373572.jpg
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/227b1598.jpg
Text cut off:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/42045de3.jpg
I would consider removing the word "Keep":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/9b60ead1.jpg
This should say "Bear Tip" instead of just "Tip":
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/9425151e.jpg
Possibly spell out "Experience" rather than "XP"?:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/f3b97445.jpg
I believe you don't need your mouse and can use keys, no?:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/b06fbaee.jpg
We can't friend PL on Facebook, but we can Like :) This may be nothing just a suggestion is all:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/00b8bbc2.jpg
I wouldn't say "From your" I would say "In" or consider revising:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/47ddbc28.jpg
This sentence confused me at first, consider revising:
http://i1197.photobucket.com/albums/aa427/Woundedeagle2/SL/5c349c36.jpg
Also,
-I didn't see a Slide about PL on Google Chrome
-Something explaining what the trade Icons look like would be nice
-"Alien Oasis II Plasma Pyramid drops lots of gold." Would be a cool slide.
-Explain what Platinum is.
Also, I get a sound of a cash register when I log out.
Although a lot of people on here are going to 'frown' upon me and say "I didn't know you were an english major, /sarcastic", I'll say in advance that it's the little things that make the game smoother and more welcoming to newer players.
-we