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RedRyder
12-08-2011, 10:30 PM
What do you guys think? The bird was extremely annoying to draw, and hopefully won't be as hard when I start digitally reworking it. Following the pattern of my last one, it's an archer with an end game set along with the elite vanity set.
I won't be doing anything more for today. I'm tired now and I'm headed to bed.
But for now leave your feedback before I start working on it
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m279/MADNIGGA2K5/19c595ee.jpg
RedRyder
12-09-2011, 06:02 AM
Just realized the picture never uploaded lol. Fixed
Mastercon
12-09-2011, 06:16 AM
Awesome RedRyder! You have got some skill, man!
NECROREAPER
12-09-2011, 07:36 AM
Do you want us to be nit picky?
Either way, you have some epic drawing abilities Red, I'm envious
RedRyder
12-09-2011, 08:03 AM
Be as picky as you'd like :) one thing I noticed off the bat (see what I did there?) is the one side of the long bow is out of proportion. It's easily fixed on the iPad anyway when I do the line art. If you notice anything else, please feel free to say so
Also, the birds left arm, the one with the bow, should be elevated more
Whoa cool!:O
Don't forget the sparkles!:D
All that cool stuff gets added during the coloring phase :)
dugantale
12-09-2011, 08:11 AM
Just a question do u edit jt on the ipad? If so what is the app id like to try it
RedRyder
12-09-2011, 09:26 AM
Just a question do u edit jt on the ipad? If so what is the app id like to try it
I sketch the main idea on paper then do everything on the iPhone or iPad. I use sketchbook mobile for iPhone, and sketchbook pro for iPad. Mobile is 2.99 and tablet vers. is 4.99 . If you wish to see my work with that app, click my deviant art link I my signature
Imacoolbirdd
12-09-2011, 09:41 AM
He looks like me!
Very good pose! But I do think it's strange that the left arm is bent. I've only done a little archery myself, so I'm no expert ;), but I think the arm should be extended fully.
Skeletonlord
12-09-2011, 10:25 AM
Wow All I can say is that this is awesome, and keep it up!
RedRyder
12-09-2011, 11:33 AM
Very good pose! But I do think it's strange that the left arm is bent. I've only done a little archery myself, so I'm no expert ;), but I think the arm should be extended fully.
I've done some archery myself too! But the avian is aiming low and not straight, so I figure his grappling arm should be bent
NECROREAPER
12-09-2011, 01:11 PM
I was gonna nitpick about the arm too, but he sorta looks like he's in a 'I'm so BA I can shoot lazily and still kill stuff' kinda pose
RedRyder
12-09-2011, 01:41 PM
Just finished the line art
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m279/MADNIGGA2K5/2ade6c8e.jpg
Elyseon
12-09-2011, 02:15 PM
Armour looks amazing, well as does the rest xD
Btw u should make a panda bear :D
RedRyder
12-09-2011, 03:52 PM
Nearly done everyone. I've been working since about 11pm and its now 4 lol. One more hour and it should be complete
Skeletonlord
12-09-2011, 04:14 PM
Nearly done everyone. I've been working since about 11pm and its now 4 lol. One more hour and it should be complete
Love to see it finished? U gonna post here full?
Gaddy
12-09-2011, 04:50 PM
I was gonna nitpick about the arm too, but he sorta looks like he's in a 'I'm so BA I can shoot lazily and still kill stuff' kinda poseI thought that was how all archers were, though...
drawing looks great, RR, you've got the PL style down pat!
Gaunab
12-09-2011, 05:04 PM
I've done some archery myself too! But the avian is aiming low and not straight, so I figure his grappling arm should be bent
Actually the bowarm needs to be straight for being able to put the maximum pressure on the string. :)
But it don't want to ruin hours of work, and it looks awesome anyways! ;)
Gaddy
12-10-2011, 01:16 AM
Short horseman's bows can be fired with a crooked bowarm...