short rap songs ... for a rap battle

[psychoscream]

Guys you think you can rap lemme see ... let it get on fire :-)

[psychoscream]

Come on don't tell me all you people can't even right a short rap song !!

[Jed]

I dislike rap yo
will I write a song no

[psychoscream]

Hey jed you are as cute as
The movie of Ted
you dislike the rap but
Instead you write a song
Like a large bag of s**t

[Bless]

Wrong section YO!

[psychoscream]

Hey bird we have no place for a nerd
So fly this is my word and you have heard

[Jed]

Watch out bird this guy's a legit rapper
sarcasm

[LwMark]

You should just post in the already arcane rap thread, keep it arcane related! We got sum fiii fo u ova ther!!!

[psychoscream]

Jed you really wanna go again with me
Your rap cannot stand a minute against me
You should rap in a baby shop
And your name is defiantly bob

[Arcanee]

wow you gotta be 5 smh if there is a thread already for it why would you make another ?

[Jed]

Shop doesn't rhyme with bob, Mister Professional Rapper.
And although "me" does rhyme with "me", it makes you look better if you use different words to rhyme.
Just some helpful criticism.

[psychoscream]

Hey Arcane mine is better than the main
cause I'm the best rapper that what every body is sayin
And you rap like a arcane legends meep moop
I will rap and I won't ever stop

[Matutd]

I've never even attempted rap
But I'm professional in comparison to this crap
I think you're thirsty for attention bro;
There's water in the tap.

You might be tapped in head pal,
You know, mentally insane
But splitting atoms is an easier process
Than finding your brain.

If you're gonna make up a thread like this
Just go to the other
That's all I got now
Sayonara brother

[Arcanee]

Matutud speaking the truth on you and no one ever said you were the best rapper lmao kiddo (He just wants attention) He wants to become famous lmao

[Oskitopee]

Hey Arcane mine is better than the main
cause I'm the best rapper that what every body is sayin
And you rap like a arcane legends meep moop
I will rap and I won't ever stop

Moop and stop don't even rhyme. M-OO-P and St-AH-P. How does that even come close?

[psychoscream]

Matud what a name dude
I bet your now nude
your rap is a insult to the words
With me never take the odds


I don't care about your attention
screw you and your description
Your rap is a infection
there is another words but
For you I won't even mention
Hah

[Arcanee]

You still didnt answer my question lol (Why would you make another post that is really the same?)

[Oskitopee]

Matud what a name dude
I bet your now nude
your rap is a insult to the words
With me never take the odds


I don't care about your attention
screw you and your description
Your rap is a infection
there is another words but
For you I won't even mention
Hah

"Words" and "odds". Again, do not rhyme.

[psychoscream]

The other post is full
And talking to you
Is dull .

[Oskitopee]

"Full" and "dull" do not rhyme.

[psychoscream]

Pee that wasn't a song

[Matutd]

Matud what a name dude
I bet your now nude
your rap is a insult to the words
With me never take the odds


I don't care about your attention
screw you and your description
Your rap is a infection
there is another words but
For you I won't even mention
Hah
So now I'm about to take some time
And, for free, I'll teach you how to rhyme
Whether it be for poetry, for the fun of it
Or for a dope *** grime.

I'm unaware if you know what grime is
But it's just rap where the next line is
Similar in sound, you know, like try this

First take the last syllable
Say it in your head,
Then think bout your next line
It shouldn't be something random like "lol you're dead"

It's supposed to make sense
And add a slight hint of insult
Instead of making up random lines
Because youre raging like the hulk.

And if my grammar's incorrect
Or there's spelling mistakes,
Please don't point them out before looking at what your mother made.

And although they weren't fluent rhymes
The words sound roughly the same
By the way, I never rap
And I'm still beating you at your own game

[Oskitopee]

Pee that wasn't a song

Oh i think making raps is childish unless they are good like Matud's above me. I just wanted to point out that ur words don't rhyme and there are certainly random phrases thrown around here and there.

[psychoscream]

What can you see when you go to bathroom pee
What can you see when you go to bathroom pee brother poop
lol that wasn't a song

[Arcanee]

Omg I laughed lmao

[Oskitopee]

What can you see when you go to bathroom pee
What can you see when you go to bathroom pee brother poop
lol that wasn't a song

its "when you go to THE bathroom".

[Matutd]

Well I'm off to bed, goodnight loyal fans :p

[Busterbiebe]

Dude here's a phrase I wanna tell u: if u eat all the candy, the (w)rapper is empty.http://i1352.photobucket.com/albums/q650/coolwiz/77A67CB7-C3F3-4932-BC65-11B4767F2F7B-708-0000011DEA5C96BD_zps4e20b053.jpg

[psychoscream]

Don't rap unless you got
A real rap sense
You ain't no professional
your words is too traditional
Go and try beginners audition
You are in a bad condition

Go somewhere and write your trash
Your mother duck face is what I'm going to smash
go away collect your ash
Nothing left oh the beginner got smashed !
Ps : I'M BATTLING 4 of you and I'm still wining

[Matutd]

Don't rap unless you got
A real rap sense
You ain't no professional
your words is too traditional
Go and try beginners audition




You are in a bad condition
Go somewhere and write your trash
Your duck face Is what will smash
Your mother is in watched
Well I would counter that rap and prove that it's all wrong
Or whatever you call it, was it a "song"
You claim you can rap, yet you don't know what rap is,
I could spit better bars than that when I was drinking from my mum's..


Wait stop, lets not go there,
Psycho might get excited
"real boobs?" He exclaims, as he closes down
"HotSinglesInYourAreaUnited..

.com, that's how he sends his time,
Searching for females on the web
Then spitting those stupid rhymes..
Wait rhymes? I meant to say incomprehensible lines.

Maybe gets dictionary
I'm sure rhyme will be in there
And if that's still not enough,
Try to compare

Look at my post
Then look back at yours
Notice how mine make sense
And yours are like "bros"

Yay that rhymed,
It must be rap
You obviously never heard how they do it in the ghetto
You know where they'd be putting that cap ;)

[psychoscream]

That was a wrong button beginner

[Busterbiebe]

So: I will will break it and ill shake it on the dance floor all night long. I will know it when I show it while I sing my rhyming song. I just said song cause its more throng and with long it really rhymes. I will steal it when i feel it, those old golden dancin times. It's so cool im out of high school cause a weekend just began. Do u luv me: text: yes, da, cè can i dance? Oh yes I can. Am I handsome , Well, not ransome, but ill try and get a tan😡 I just beat u😊 ha

[Busterbiebe]

That actually rhymed and had an understandable rythem. But u probably don't even know real music. Quarter notes eighth notes sixteenth half whole. That's a big part of rap composition.

[psychoscream]

Deleted

[xcainnblecterx]

The beginner is going to bed
With his little bare Ted
he is crying all over the night
He saw mom videos on a site

ps : how does that fits I am finished raping on you Last thin screw you ...

#ragequits

[Busterbiebe]

This thread should just b closed all he's doing is bragging how he's better than ppl and criticizing them in the most weirdest ways.....

[smeagolette]

Lolz

[Jed]

The beginner is going to bed
With his little bare Ted
he is crying all over the night
He saw mom videos on a site

ps : how does that fits I am finished raping on you Last thin screw you ...
>raping on you
The only thing you might be.. raping.. is your possible dignity, if you had any to begin with.
This thread is going downhill fast..

[Arcanee]

This thread should just b closed all he's doing is bragging how he's better than ppl and criticizing them in the most weirdest ways..... I agree.

[psychoscream]

Guys the only thing I wanted is to give you fun I have over reacted I will not
Rap Again here and sorry I hope all people do as I will . I'm sorry I can't even rap when I am writing dirty things ..... Let's just write a general rap songs about love or etc...
Am sorry guys :-)

[Testi]

Take it for what its worth
This rap is a lesson
After the booty put forth
My rhymes is a blessin

You think you got skill
You think you got game
But brotha get real
Your rhymes are pretty lame

The name is Testi
Tattooed on yo brain
Cuz I'm the best b
Words fall like rain
Fool dont test me.

[psychoscream]

Dude don't you get
I will rap it till you get it
I can smash you and you
will admit it
Rap is a thing you can't do I will say it again
And again screw you
ps : dude please stop battling me I am done here

[smeagolette]

Ringdingdingdong rinadingdingdingdong...ringdingdong, ringadingdingdingdong.. lol yeah that's old skool something or other not sure if its rap but it rhymes :)

[psychoscream]

I admit that was the first good song I write for today cause I wasn't mad

[Arcanee]

I rip out your organs You rapping like you foreign Leave you absent for your future You already know the procedure Open a thread and close it You need a pull up Hold up Ill send a box of huggies to your mail box make you form wrinkles Now you need botops Rot like a crop dont mess around and get tied in a knot You just been warned I hurt you like a thorn .

[psychoscream]

Sorry dude I don't understand you
But what I will say
Sorry arcanee and sorry matude and sorry to every one I have insulted please do not write more insults ...

[Arcanee]

[QUOTE=psychoscream;959589]Sorry dude I don't understand you
But what I will say
Sorry arcanee and sorry matude and sorry to every one I have insulted please do not write more insults ...[/QUOT? Lmao ?I know you not talking about understanding You spelt bear as bare so please and you said you wanted to rap :/?

[psychoscream]

Dude stop writing on this are you def stop I don't want to write insulting songs here
You know I won't even respond again

[Busterbiebe]

I'm glad the candy got back into the empty rapper(; once empty-hearted for 2 hours, next filled with friendly shame!!! Booya I'm making a poetry thread c u all there!!!!

[LwMark]

From readin this thread
I think yall got some problems
U should send a ticket to support
Maybe STS can solvem

[Jcyee]

From readin this thread
I think yall got some problems
U should send a ticket to support
Maybe STS can solvem

This one's my favorite. haha

[LwMark]

From readin this thread
I think yall got some problems
U should send a ticket to support
Maybe STS can solvem

This one's my favorite. haha

Dat fiiiiiiii lol

[Zaonabiuibil]

Dude your raps are lame,
You're looking for the hall of fame but all I see is shame.

Boy you're trying to pop that rap,
I'll end this ridiculous crap by popping a cap.

I don't usually rhyme,
But after seeing you,
Not doing it would be a crime.

Try a mental institute,
Or an asylum,
We don't care about how many horns you can toot.

Now lemme pull it back,
You're still in elementary,
This much advancement might give you a heart attack,
So keep your "bars" on your "talent" rack.


Word.


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[psychoscream]

Bill you're aiming high but you can never reach the sky
Your rap will not every defeated me even in Hawaii
when you was writing your crap you was happy yay
You don't know that you will face I

Dude you gotta work on your attitude
Your voice is lousy and you're rude
me you have misunderstood
I am rapping but yours ain't good
. Huh

[Zaonabiuibil]

Sky and Hawaii don't rhyme, nor do yay and I.

Gf.


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