Battle Time XIII

Hey guys, this is Battle Time number 13! Can you believe it? Anyway, guys sorry, but for the Supersonic competition (which is like the best idea ever) so we wont be posting some for a little bit, also we have a speacial guest, Woundedeagle :)

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P.S. We still havnt gotten many suggestions :(

Nice story. :)

Made me laugh when you sent a PM to Archer saying, "shut up"!

Some tips for your next story:

• Clean it up a little, especially so you don't see PM's like "SHUTUP", as they could be taken the wrong way.

• Make it flow a little more. While this one was entertaining, it seemed a little rough on the edges, so to say. It was kinda jumpy and wasn't flowing the way a picture story should flow.


Anyways, nice story. It was cute. :)

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Originally Posted by Apollo

Nice story. :)

Made me laugh when you sent a PM to Archer saying, "shut up"!

Some tips for your next story:

• Clean it up a little, especially so you don't see PM's like "SHUTUP", as they could be taken the wrong way.

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Hey Apollo, thanks for that, i didnt mean to say that in the show, just he was asking me something and he didnt relize we wwere going so i replied to him, shutup

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Originally Posted by 25thninja

Hey Apollo, thanks for that, i didnt mean to say that in the show, just he was asking me something and he didnt relize we wwere going so i replied to him, shutup

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Lol, no need to explain to me. :)

I was just giving you some friendly tips for your future stories. GJ on this one, btw, if I haven't mentioned it. :)

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Originally Posted by Apollo

Lol, no need to explain to me. :)

I was just giving you some friendly tips for your future stories. GJ on this one, btw, if I haven't mentioned it. :)

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Ty, :Dalso, make sure that Archerridjnd and Woundedeagle get some credit, dont just aplaud (or however you spell it) for me.

Lol empty forest haven O.o