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12-13-2014, 01:36 PM
bearuang

correct my grammar

ill give shivering set or maybe missed 1 piece if im not wrong to
stalk my acc and try find grammatical error and correct it
post it here
12-13-2014, 02:30 PM
CrimsonTider

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Originally Posted by bearuang

I'll give a shivering set, or maybe missed one piece if I'm not wrong, to
stalk my account and try to find grammatical errors and correct them. Post them here.

FIFY

P.S. Give the set to KingFu. He broke.
12-13-2014, 05:43 PM
KingFu

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Originally Posted by CrimsonTider

FIFY

P.S. Give the set to KingFu. He broke.

Pls! I log on now!!
12-13-2014, 06:12 PM
End

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Originally Posted by bearuang:1955124

ill give shivering set or maybe missed 1 piece if im not wrong to
stalk my acc and try find grammatical error and correct it
post it here

I'll give my shivering set or maybe I missed a piece. If i'm not wrong, stalk my account, try to find grammatical errors and correct it
12-13-2014, 07:13 PM
Giazagilur

Hi bearuang! Out of curiosity, what is your native language? ^.^

I'll give shivering set, but possibly without one piece because I'm missing it.

Go to my account, and to try find and correct the grammatical error.

Post it here.
12-13-2014, 08:32 PM
Sheugokin

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Originally Posted by Giazagilur

Hi bearuang! Out of curiosity, what is your native language? ^.^

I'll give shivering set, but possibly without one piece because I'm missing it.

Go to my account, and to try find and correct the grammatical error.

Post it here.

There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentence that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.
12-13-2014, 09:13 PM
Giazagilur

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Originally Posted by Sheugokin

There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentence that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.

Sorry, the second part was due to carelessness.

As for the first part, I had to look that up and you're absolutely correct. I used the comma to emphasize a pause so op would understand it better by reading the sentence in fractions. However, it seems I did misuse the comma.

Props to you and your English grammar.
12-13-2014, 09:16 PM
Giazagilur

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Originally Posted by Sheugokin

There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentence that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.

The two sentences*

Gotcha ;)
12-13-2014, 10:05 PM
CrimsonTider

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Originally Posted by End

I'll give my shivering set or maybe I missed a piece. If I'mnot wrong, stalk my account. Try to find (the, any)grammatical errors and correct[/B]them.[/B]

Good attempt. The original statement is difficult to translate towards the middle.
12-13-2014, 10:29 PM
XDJennietang

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Originally Posted by Sheugokin

There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentences that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.

yw :3
12-14-2014, 07:38 PM
nun

wats gramer?
12-15-2014, 11:01 AM
NotYoCookiez

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Originally Posted by nun

wats gramer?

Grammer*

Newbie.
12-15-2014, 07:29 PM
Reunegade

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Originally Posted by NotYoCookiez

Grammer*

Newbie.

Grammar*
12-15-2014, 07:43 PM
CrimsonTider

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Originally Posted by Reun

Grammar*

You missed the joke.
12-15-2014, 09:10 PM
nun

wut jok?
12-15-2014, 11:09 PM
KingFu

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Originally Posted by CrimsonTider

You missed the joke.

He usually does.
12-15-2014, 11:48 PM
iRandom

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12-16-2014, 04:28 PM
Sheugokin

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Originally Posted by iRandom

Attachment 112258
itz purfeckt kno righting errurs finded

Remember, a computer is never better than a human. Tsk. Tsk. Tsk.
12-16-2014, 08:54 PM
iRandom

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Originally Posted by Sheugokin

Remember, a computer is never better than a human. Tsk. Tsk. Tsk.

The human brain does only FIVE things better than a computer
and fixing grammar is not one of them
12-24-2014, 01:35 AM
Suentous PO

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Originally Posted by iRandom

The human brain does only FIVE things better than a computer
and fixing grammar is not one of them

Not even does the shotty article you cited not say "only five", it misses many other capabilities.
Artificial intelligence is still nowhere near common human capabilities.
12-24-2014, 01:26 PM
iRandom

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Originally Posted by Suentous PO

Not even does the shotty article you cited not say "only five", it misses many other capabilities.
Artificial intelligence is still nowhere near common human capabilities.

i agree. AI's is far beyond the human mind
12-24-2014, 02:17 PM
LEVEL ONE

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Originally Posted by iRandom

i agree. AI's is far beyond the human mind

Except for creative thinking and energy efficiency.
12-25-2014, 01:54 AM
iRandom

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Originally Posted by LEVEL ONE

Except for creative thinking and energy efficiency.

i also agree. humans have no creativity whatsoever and rely on coffee to stay awake