So, I need feedback or maybe some crticism just like Parth did, in his other thread. (Good luck btw) It seems my video got no attention at all, and Its either people didnt see it, or they just really dont like it. So, I have 3 Versions of my video, 2 of which were slideshows with some background music thrown with it, and the third one being my current one which I filmed with my sister. So, please tell me what you think, Thanks!

Link:
http://youtu.be/L7Obg2tzTBg