Which haiku to pick?

**KingFu** · 11-30-2010, 12:42 AM

So. Which one?

1) He is Bright lime green
He hangs out with bears on elves
Pocket legends droid

2) People say "Droid Does"
But what does he do, seriously?
Does pocket legends!

3) You gotta love droid.
That little booger sure does.
Does pocket legends

4) Its loading Twitter
Switching to pocket legends
You gotta find droid!

5) Green catches your eyes
You look over to see droid!
On pocket legends?!

6) A green marshmallow
You can not believe your eyes
Pocket legends droid!

I'm not really the poet, but please tell me which one you like best. Thanks!

**juhnken773** · 11-30-2010, 01:09 AM

I really love #2 but it doesn't work cuz the 2 lines is 9 syllables.

Other then that, I like 3

**Lesrider** · 11-30-2010, 01:19 AM

Can change "seriously" to "really"

**juhnken773** · 11-30-2010, 01:30 AM

Or yu can make it more on the humor side by editing it sorta like:

[line1]. . .
But what DOES he do? Really!? (or, For real!?)
Uh, pocket legends. (or, Pocket legends, duh!)

Little things can change the expession of yur text. Makes it more fun.