The Ultimate Hitchhiker's Guide To Alterra, Part One- Nub

[iiirootzz]

Good, just i have one thing to mention: it's some solid block of text, not easy to read tho. WHy dont you make some sections, highlights or titles? Maybe even some scshot or picture would help. Otherwise, good job

It isn't supposed to be like a guide, it's more of a novel style passage, modeled after the Hitchhiker's Guide to The Galaxy novels.

[snowfu]

It isn't supposed to be like a guide, it's more of a novel style passage, modeled after the Hitchhiker's Guide to The Galaxy novels.

Exactly right, after reading the original book I wanted to do this for Alterra!