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    Default correct my grammar

    ill give shivering set or maybe missed 1 piece if im not wrong to
    stalk my acc and try find grammatical error and correct it
    post it here

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    Quote Originally Posted by bearuang View Post
    I'll give a shivering set, or maybe missed one piece if I'm not wrong, to
    stalk my account and try to find grammatical errors and correct them. Post them here.
    FIFY

    P.S. Give the set to KingFu. He broke.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonTider View Post
    FIFY

    P.S. Give the set to KingFu. He broke.
    Pls! I log on now!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by bearuang:1955124
    ill give shivering set or maybe missed 1 piece if im not wrong to
    stalk my acc and try find grammatical error and correct it
    post it here
    I'll give my shivering set or maybe I missed a piece. If i'm not wrong, stalk my account, try to find grammatical errors and correct it

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    Hi bearuang! Out of curiosity, what is your native language? ^.^

    I'll give shivering set, but possibly without one piece because I'm missing it.

    Go to my account, and to try find and correct the grammatical error.

    Post it here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Giazagilur View Post
    Hi bearuang! Out of curiosity, what is your native language? ^.^

    I'll give shivering set, but possibly without one piece because I'm missing it.

    Go to my account, and to try find and correct the grammatical error.

    Post it here.
    There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentence that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

    For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sheugokin View Post
    There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentence that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

    For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.
    Sorry, the second part was due to carelessness.

    As for the first part, I had to look that up and you're absolutely correct. I used the comma to emphasize a pause so op would understand it better by reading the sentence in fractions. However, it seems I did misuse the comma.

    Props to you and your English grammar.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sheugokin View Post
    There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentence that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

    For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.
    The two sentences*

    Gotcha

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    Quote Originally Posted by End View Post
    I'll give my shivering set or maybe I missed a piece. If I'mnot wrong, stalk my account. Try to find (the, any)grammatical errors and correct[/B]them.[/B]
    Good attempt. The original statement is difficult to translate towards the middle.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sheugokin View Post
    There is no comma after "set" because "possibly without one piece because I'm missing it" is not an independent clause. Therefore, a comma is used with a conjunction ONLY when the two sentences that are being combined are independent clauses. In this case they are not.

    For clarity purposes, delete ", and." Then add "to" after "try" in the third line.
    yw :3

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    wats gramer?

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    Quote Originally Posted by nun View Post
    wats gramer?
    Grammer*

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    Quote Originally Posted by NotYoCookiez View Post
    Grammer*

    Newbie.
    Grammar*

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reun View Post
    Grammar*
    You missed the joke.
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    wut jok?

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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonTider View Post
    You missed the joke.
    He usually does.

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    Quote Originally Posted by iRandom View Post
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    itz purfeckt kno righting errurs finded
    Remember, a computer is never better than a human. Tsk. Tsk. Tsk.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sheugokin View Post
    Remember, a computer is never better than a human. Tsk. Tsk. Tsk.
    The human brain does only FIVE things better than a computer
    and fixing grammar is not one of them
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    Quote Originally Posted by iRandom View Post
    Not even does the shotty article you cited not say "only five", it misses many other capabilities.
    Artificial intelligence is still nowhere near common human capabilities.
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