Star Legends Halloween Haiku Contest!

[Xiaoclove]

I hung on like death
Such killing was not easy
It took me awhile

Before I came back to life
It driven away the pain
But my Heart was not
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Xiaoclove-lv 30 commando
Guild-Neon Genesis
(Last guild I would ever join)

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Alright, here goes!
I have a strong feeling ill be typing/thinking for a while....

IGN Royalcommando

This will be two poems from different perspectives.

Grab the ops trash bags,
Don the commando gas masks
Fill the bags with greed....

Buy all the cannons,
Stock up on heavy flashguns
Give it all away....

The first poem is written from the sight of a child, with the exception of the last line, sorta. Second is written from the perspective of an adult.

In a way, some kids are really inconsiderate. Ive seen some people who go Trick or Treating just for the candy, and nothing else. Not even to hang out with friends. If i could, i would tell my parents to not spend so much and let me only give candy to the little ones who arent greedy. But that would be really disapppointing and mean to the others. I hope you liked the poem and my meaning to it

I kinda quit PL/SL until i saw this thread! Thanks for pulling me back in (:

Awww, SL related?...im gonna make a new version of both....

Alright, new poems are written! The meaning stil stands, however, just less shown in the poems

[Emueggenberg]

Iowastate
<The Best> Guild Leader

#1Trick or treat blackstar
The great pumpkin will be here
To take u away*

#2 The USC will not make*
It through Halloween night for*
The ghosts and gouls here

[Kahlua]

Alright, here goes!
I have a strong feeling ill be typing/thinking for a while....

IGN Royalcommando

This will be two poems from different perspectives.

Grab the ops trash bags,
Don the commandos masks,
Fill the bags with greed....

Buy all the cannons,
Stock up on big bags of flashguns
Give it all away....

The first poem is written from the sight of a child, with the exception of the last line, sorta. Second is written from the perspective of an adult.

In a way, some kids are really inconsiderate. Ive seen some people who go Trick or Treating just for the candy, and nothing else. Not even to hang out with friends. If i could, i would tell my parents to not spend so much and let me only give candy to the little ones who arent greedy. But that would be really disapppointing and mean to the others. I hope you liked the poem and my meaning to it

I kinda quit PL/SL until i saw this thread! Thanks for pulling me back in (:

Awww, SL related?...im gonna make a new version of both....

Alright, new poems are written! The meaning stil stands, however, just less shown in the poems

You might want to check on your syllables, second lines have 6 and 8 respectively

[Epic Unicorns!]

Epicunicorns
<Epic Spaceship>

#1 Commandos

Commandos, please tank
I would not like to die here
They will all kill me!

#2 Revives
I do not know why
You want a res from me now,
When you ran away!

[maneatingtree]

Dual wielding guns
Shooting lots of creepy things
BOOM i ate some candy

-ign maneatingtree

[Cyberwarrior]

Engineer alone
Facing the evil pumpkins
SPLAT BOOM!black widow

pretty kewl.

[Cyberwarrior]

oops my name is cyberwarrior guild: serenity

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Thanks for the heads up! J wasnt payibg attention when editing the poems (:

And...roasty!!!!! I thought you quit ): but you didnt! Your just really inactive! Hehe. Wb....i think? You came back on the
10th is my guess (;

[Dexmann]

IGN: Dexmann

The still night whispers,
To my cravings deep inside,
trick or treat BlackStar?

As the ghosts draw near
I pull over my blanket
Star Legends in hand

[Matutd]

Thanks for the heads up! J wasnt payibg attention when editing the poems (:

And...roasty!!!!! I thought you quit ): but you didnt! Your just really inactive! Hehe. Wb....i think? You came back on the
10th is my guess (;

He didn't quit or go inactive, he was banned from forums for not being old enough, but it was his birthday the other day. So now we gotta put up with him again :P

[Noobbe]

Its empty in space
Time to find my cold carbine
Empty shells make ghosts

Cybrax
Knights of Cydonia

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He didn't quit or go inactive, he was banned from forums for not being old enough, but it was his birthday the other day. So now we gotta put up with him again :P

Lol, I knew that. I didnt want to mention, though. His bday was the date mentioned before.

[Barrington]

Barrington

Haiku #1
kill all aliens
shoot at their big green faces
steal all their money

Haiku #2
haiku's can be silly
Commando Engineer and
Operative lol

[Phoenixking]

Phoenixsnipe
Alience of blackstar

Haikus #1 i callz diz halloween
Oh sweet halloween
Fill me with terror and joy
Oh so you do....WHEEEEEEEEE! (one sylable for wheeeee)

Haikus #2 where meh candy O.o
Where did meh candy go?!
It hid from me awhile ago!
I need my candy, NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

[Dracula]

Dracula
<Order of the Dragon>

Haiku 1.) Theme: Murderer, Title: I AM COMMANDO
Haiku 2.) Theme: Graveyard, Title: The V.I.P. List

[Phoenixking]

How did you do the second one drac?!?! Lol :P

[Whirlzap]

Xwhirlz
<BEO>
Entries:
Ghosts on Star Legends
I feel a chill in my suit
I think I just pee'd

Tear through me with pain
I suffer through endless wars
My scars speak to me.

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Here's some things for fun:
Sam in his costume
Preparing to kill monsters
Won't feel me behind

Oh boy I will rush!
Then, SNEAK ATTACK! I yell so
Loudly he sees me.


Star legends is fun
Wait what did I just say now?
I want my mommy.
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Here's a piece I wrote
For my good friend the Deathly
Reaper, listen now.

An ancient legend
Go awaken by the night
And deal his last scar.

The curse of death sings
Reaps and steals the heart only
Now to be destroyed.

Young adventurer
Listen to my words for death
Comes at dark night's sound.
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Thirty haunted days
We watch the endless dark strands
Of evil raze by.

Could we have always
Ever been so ignorant
Of the fact we died?

And we watch the last
One we trusted die, too.
And we must talk now.

[goddessofpower]

Hear the moans and
Gripping from the ghosts
on guard who hate their
Job.

You are being watched,
By who,not me,choking
Sounds from behind,you
See nothing.

Tipgoger
<neongenesis>

[goddessofpower]

Did tht before I noticed he said haiku >_<