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    May the community please comment and critique it, please?

    Watch it in 1080p!

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    Hey buddy,

    Great video and love the music.

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    Very good video. Could win the competition. I love the music, you went in depth on lots of different aspects!
    I loved it! Brilliant Guide!

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    Great job Apollo! Maybe you could add two more songs instead of playing the same song three times?

    Btw, nice pink crossbow .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silentarrow View Post
    Great job Apollo! Maybe you could add two more songs instead of playing the same song three times?

    Btw, nice pink crossbow .
    ROFL! True! I know, I know, you have any ideas? I'm stumped. ;(


    EDIT: Also, do you think captions/text bubbles would be too interfering?
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    Chat bubbles would be nice.

    These might fit

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silentarrow View Post
    Great job Apollo! Maybe you could add two more songs instead of playing the same song three times?

    Btw, nice pink crossbow .
    lol thats just the purple color fading into a pinkish shade Don't know if you're being sarcastic or not.

    After watching the winning video for the PL contest...I really think these videos need voice tutorials. All that reading takes away from actually watching the video itself. Not everyone is a visual learner. If you talked through what the text said, it'd be doubling up and be a lot more clear.
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    Awesome video
    Maybe get music that doesn't stop in the middle of thr video
    Just a suggestion

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    It looks pink to me!


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    I doubt they'd name it the same thing as the epic lvl 35 handheld crossbow
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kahlua View Post
    I doubt they'd name it the same thing as the epic lvl 35 han
    dheld crossbow
    When he entered the CS, all the other crossbows looked purple, I'm positive it's pink .

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    Watch it in 1080p. It's 100% purple lol.

    THIS is the pink crossbow

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    Oh well, you proved me wrong +2 rep to you .

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    1. Glad to see you more involved in SL, Parth!

    2. It seems more like a Gameplay video than a Tutorial at this point. As well as the very good and useful in-game footage which is required, a few helpful overview tips could give new players a better idea of what SL is all about. For example:

    "Star Legends is a team-oriented dungeon MMO. With a team up to 5 players, you will fight through various campaigns, each having around 5 separate areas. The last area will contain that campaign's hardest boss, often dropping the best loot."

    ...or something like that. You get the picture.

    3. It only looks pink because of the red background.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nightarcher View Post
    1. Glad to see you more involved in SL, Parth!

    2. It seems more like a Gameplay video than a Tutorial at this point. As well as the very good and useful in-game footage which is required, a few helpful overview tips could give new players a better idea of what SL is all about. For example:

    "Star Legends is a team-oriented dungeon MMO. With a team up to 5 players, you will fight through various campaigns, each having around 5 separate areas. The last area will contain that campaign's hardest boss, often dropping the best loot."

    ...or something like that. You get the picture.

    3. It only looks pink because of the red background.
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    How'd you like the songs Apollo?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silentarrow View Post
    How'd you like the songs Apollo?
    I liked them! I figured though, it's better if I do a VoiceOver. As somebody pointed out, music detracts from the point of a "guide". So, I reworked it, will be uploading it shortly. Bear in mind, I had to speak really really really fast, so I tripped over my tongue a few times and voice was a bit higher pitched because of lack of breath. Anyways, it should be up on YouTube within 20 minutes. I'll post a link here.
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    Video uploaded! Check out the new one! Please critique it, don't hold back! I really appreciate all of the criticism!



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    Quote Originally Posted by Apollo View Post
    Video uploaded! Check out the new one! Please critique it, don't hold back! I really appreciate all of the criticism!



    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6Rn86lA28g
    Very good Apollo! Great. I love the transitions!
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    Quote Originally Posted by skeletonlord View Post
    It says the video is currently unavailable
    Yeah, it's in the middle of processing. Stupid slow YouTube!

    It should be uploaded now, although I realized when I was messing around with the Robo voice, I accidentally left it as that. It seems rather bad, so now I have to go back and change it. :/
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