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    There was once a guild of heroes who scattered across Arlor. A tale of a legendary artifact that allows the bearer to have immortality and have divine ichor flow through their veins was heard by the Bard and has sang the tale to thousands of Arlorians. Numerous guilds and legends have fallen while seeking for this legendary artifact. Rumors of which Captain Rutger, the leader of the commandos, along with his soldiers have found the artifact in the Arcanium Grounds of the Dead City. But the Captain had more secrets to why he wanted the artifact which he kept until a group of heroes found his real motives while they were about to destroy the powerful artifact. He then was slain because of his selfish actions of which had caused the fall of Tristan, a loyal soldier who died while finding the artifact, and Ann, a treasure hunter who had also died while helping the captain find the mysterious artifact.

    The group of heroes felt bitterness and hate towards the captain but had not felt victorious when they had slayed the traitorous soldier. They needed to find the real monster who had used the artifact to kill their comrades, The Demon Lord, "Lord Madrom" which will then make their hearts satisfied with all the grief and despair the soldiers had gone through.

    The group of heroes had then continued their search for a new way to become immortal. They traveled far lands from The Great City of Kraag to the Ydra Forest in search for a village whom a Miner had told them about. The village's name was the "Old Garetta Village" and was destroyed but the heroes had gathered numerous materials in order to rebuild the village to it's former glory. The heroes has sought revenge to the orcs who had destroyed the village and had promised to kill the King of the orcs, King Korgar Goretusk.

    After Killing the orc king, they had to go back to their quest to search for immortality and had traveled to the "Chancel of Light" where Archangels and Lightbearers live. The Archangels had bestowed upon them the rank of "Outsider" and had told them that they have to complete quests and help the Order to kill the Sorceress Voryana and Lich Corvis to increase their rank and bestow upon them the title, Luminous Templar/Dark Acolyte.

    The heroes had helped the Order for months and years of work and have slain the Sorceress and Lich Corvis and had been granted titles of such with accordance with their ranks. However, they still haven't found a way of immortality, so they had traveled again until they reached the Festerfang. The people in Festerfang had been debating whether to help the swamp to be renewed or maintain the swamp as it is. They had divided in to two groups, the Red and the Blue. The heroes however, didn't like the border between the two so they had agreed to eliminate all the lizards who had killed the people of festerfang in order to bring peace.

    The heroes fought for months but the debate and border grew as time past. The heroes then had battled with the chiefs of the lizard people until they had reached the place where the Beast of the Swamp lives. The heroes fought the beast for weeks but the beast managed to wipe out the heroes one by one. On their death, the gods had seen the pure hearts of the heroes and their seek for justice and had granted the heroes Immortality!

    The heroes had resurrected and had formed a guild named "Divine Heavenly" and swore to the gods to help their fellow arlorians and people to defeat the great evils that await. The leader of the guild, "Reapply" and other members of the guild will continue their journey to defeat the great evil to bring peace and order among the people and create light in the darkness.

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    I liked how the story shifted accordingly with respect to the timelines in the Arcane Legend's lore.

    The ominous Captain Rutger with his facile intentions to accomplish his deeds in a fallacious manner; Whereas his troops grew abhorrence towards their captain for they and their allies risked their lives for the captain and got no compensation in return.

    As for a heroic guild newly born into the Arcaneiverse sought to chastise the darkness whilst the assistance of light on their sides.

    I rate this a 7.5/10.

    Looking forward to a part 2. keep up the good work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flamesofanger View Post
    I liked how the story shifted accordingly with respect to the timelines in the Arcane Legend's lore.

    The ominous Captain Rutger with his facile intentions to accomplish his deeds in a fallacious manner; Whereas his troops grew abhorrence towards their captain for they and their allies risked their lives for the captain and got no compensation in return.

    As for a heroic guild newly born into the Arcaneiverse sought to chastise the darkness whilst the assistance of light on their sides.

    I rate this a 7.5/10.

    Looking forward to a part 2. keep up the good work.
    Thank youu!!
    ~GUILDMASTER~

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