Nice.
I'm fairly certain that you can put music in your video, so long as you give credit to where credit is due. Ever wonder why they don't put your video up on the search right away? I'm fairly certain it's to check your video for violations of copyrights or ToS. I know that they added links to my videos (next to description) that takes you to the artist's videos. If you do add music through their video editor, it'll give you a list of music that IS allowed to be added in videos.
You didn't do to badly, considering you didn't ever have anyone helping you (except for that bird in the beginning). And the quality level isn't so terrible I wanted to scratch my eyes out, so that's a good sign.
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