Windmill vs. Aimed Shot Coming Soon!!!

[Jackyll]

Like the title says

[Lalarie]

Can you point out where is the warriors head? Just so ik ofc

[Jackyll]

Hehe aim for the pencil point

[Bless]

Ohhh the pic is sideways

[Jackyll]

Ohhh the pic is sideways

there we go, stupid cell phone pictures. sorry.

[Sibayjing]

Can you resize the picture? I like step by step in drawings

[Jackyll]

yeah let me get a little farther i'll and i'll resize them, want them smaller?

[Lalarie]

Ahhhhh thanks! Awesome drawings like always!

[Sibayjing]

Not to bad Jackyll!
Dynamic construction, you seem to know well the men muscle for using it in a comics style.

In your drawing, you have a slight low-angle shot isnt it? The rogue could be a little smaller to put her in a perspective. About the girl, your rogue is a rather muscular but It doesn't bother me. Do you like muscle?

If you have a time, clean and color setting would be really welcome. Good job from a student in 2D animation

[Jackyll]

Not to bad Jackyll!
Dynamic construction, you seem to know well the men muscle for using it in a comics style.

In your drawing, you have a slight low-angle shot isnt it? The rogue could be a little smaller to put her in a perspective. About the girl, your rogue is a rather muscular but It doesn't bother me. Do you like muscle?

If you have a time, clean and color setting would be really welcome. Good job from a student in 2D animation

Hey thank you so much. Really good comment.

The muscle build i use is VERY exagerated lol. But have to learn the how each muscle works with the other and how they appear under the skin to exagerate it this much.

Also the rouge is a little more muscular than she will be when i'm done, but adding the lines of the muscles help in the persepctive. I only done dymanic low-angle shot like this once or twice so my perspective is off i agree. Hopefully this will fix itself when I add the depth in the picture.

But thanks agian

[Jackyll]

Outline done

[wrathstorm]

I should say that this drawing is awesome Couldn't wait to see the final drawing

[Jackyll]

Got a LITTLE carried away on the aimed shot lol but i'll clean it up

[The Darkling]

Not so sure about the rainbow arrow, but overall, its good

[Cremated]

Jacks back or bumped?

Jack get on infbrother..

[ImTheJunk]

Wow Jack, awesome drawing.

[GoodSyntax]

Not to be picky, because I think your art is awesome, but a radiant arrow head would probably be a better effect than the rainbow aura.

[Rare]

Looks awesome