What do you guys think? 10 lines with rhyme. (Had to copy and paste. Said my file was to large to be attached.)



“A Game Called Pocket Legends”

You see, there is this game I enjoy to play
With friendly players from around the world all day
This game is called Pocket Legends
If I could, I would never put it down even for a second
I meet many players and friends online
Most of them are very kind
My level 59 archer is sure to destroy enemies
While the nearby mage spams heals and freeze
So you see, I clearly enjoy this game
And it is certainly anything, but lame!

Any improvements or errors?