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    Ok, well here's my ending, 150 words. A little jerky but I tried to smooth it out a little. Hope you guys like it!


    The thin man sat in the chair, slouched. "Sir, tea?" A woman's voice stated.
    "Get the hell away from me." The man stood up abruptly, sending the tea cups and coasters flying across the room.
    "Get me my coat already, it's time I pay a visit to the asylum."
    "He's defiantly loosing his brain." Whispered a lady.

    There in a bed lay a old man, "Ahhh! How are you my dear friend?" The old man asked.
    "Good as always Mr. Hyde."
    "Today, I am a little bit antsy, without my morning cup of tea...." the thin man stammered.
    The old man rested his head to stare into the eyes of the thin man. "Sometimes, we humans are blind to what hurts us..."
    The thin man flinched, remembering his diseased other half tell him those very words.
    "Um, Mr. Hyde, I never caught your first name, sorry."

    "Oh, it's just Alastor."

    Name in-game: Rafela
    Last edited by Running Pear; 09-03-2012 at 11:12 AM.

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