IF YOU ARE NOT INTELLECTUALLY SAVVY, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND READING THE P.S SECTION BELOW THE POEM.
Entry 2:
Metaphorical Dilemma
And we
played . I drew
On asphalt circles, squares , diamonds
Crayons , and we sat each
In its geometric figure ,
Not to dare
We
walk out of invisible walls
in the,
forest,
we fight
And we began to look at.
Each other , and then in groups,
And we have not moved,
the lag froze us,
I still managed to collect us,
through closing some tabs,
to reduce lag.
In small groups , have increased.
And of white and blue and green lines
that the
mini-map produced,
because
no,
one, wants to get lost in the depths of
the
mega maze.
We had
war , because
That's our mission right?
I've spent some
time to play ,
And even addict myself to
pixelated life
distinctly pocket legends.
a true legend.
But as i arose from my,
Computer Chair, ,
I saw God,
Alone, in a sphere .
The letter and makeup
And some mountains are among us
such as,
almighty Mount Fang.
Folders , closed , sad fences
Nor yet to come then
In winter absolute threshold
Kiss my white temple , let the emotion go
And then dive down and go
In another speech horizon...
but wait,
Oh No
there is no horizon.
Oh No!
Its all covered in snow,
Oh No!
Elsa put up a nasty show!
Oh No!
She just let it all Go!
Oh Yes, she can be saved,
and then the roads shall be paved.
And the town of Arrendale,
Will be as happy as Chip and Dale.
I can not tell you anything
See you or goodbye
Appeared , not only to you
farewell .
Why do you say goodbye ?
We had so much fun,
We played together,
We made snowmen,
We Laughed,
We Enjoyed Life,
But now,
You hide,
Behind,
the Door.
I would not have any reason
"Farewell " rights
After all you are the queen - and ask
As I lost definitely .
And from me to you
The word itself will freeze. Eternally.
No you do not know well shout
My beloved , my lost .
When I last saw
You knew and you, cry and you
And you left with all the station
No there was no train , no.
I was back again
I wanted to
come off of you,
but then you rushed me.
But where the railway
It's like someone took it .
I would tell you details
Destiny would be to change
My girlfriend over the mountains
My girlfriend over time.
By the time I will not find you again,
Ill be dead
Under nuclear cynical goodbye
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P.SOver the past 5 days, i have worked on this poem for an average of 5 hours a day, to perfect the grammar, poem structure, and the heartouching aspect of it.
I have even went as far as to ask the writing clinician at my school to check it out and conference with me. (lol, i didnt tell her what it was for. If i did, she would be like W.T.F.) hehe, anyways, she gave me tips on parts of it.
Now, you might have several thoughts running through your mind as you read this poem...
1. How could a 14 year old gamer right something as 'deep' as this?
Answer:Thats because im a genius
MUHAHAHAHAHA!
No, jk. The moral of it all is that if you take the time to put in your ultimate effort in anything, it will pay off. This not only applies to what ive written but it also applies to pl itself and Life. I dont think ill be needing to explain that.
2. Did i plagerise this? (answer: No. This is 100% original.)
3. Your story doesn't make any sense? Are you gay or what? (due to talking about lvlone being a girlfriend, or anyother confusing parts of the poem) (Answer: I am 100% straight, the girlfriend part is a symbolic term a good similie to describe this is this "
LevelOne was famous and well known and thought of in pocket legends, as a boyfriend cares and is devoted to his girlfriend
4. How does this have
anything to do with pocket legends/and/or frozen.
Here is my explanation:
The correlation can be found in the extensive poem. I highlighted a few key terms to help you understand it more efficiently. As you can see, i never included the term "Pocket legends" in the whole poem... Why? This is because a term like that wouldn't fit in rhythmically. (however it can be inferred.)
5. Some parts are pretty confusing? I dont get it!!??
[B]Answer: Here are some parts that may be confusing:
1:
When I last saw
You knew and you, cry and you
And you left with all the station
No there was no train , no.
I was back again
I wanted to
come off of you,
but then you rushed me.
But where the railway
It's like someone took it .
I think you did understand the relationship of "come off of u" (in pl if someone is having lag in a fight they will say 'off'.)
However you might still be wondering what the whole train thing was about.
Explanation: When i said you left with the station, but the train never came because there was no railway,
it is a "play with words" meaning that you cannot accomplish something without the essentials. (you cannot ride in a train when there is no railway, or no foundation.
Now, how does this relate to pl?
Explanation: The best way of explaining this is through an example:
Lets say that you are in a pvp arena with another guy that is the same class, and has the same exact gear and build as you.
The train stanza works here perfectly because in this pvp fight, the player with the better foundation or skill will win.
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Inner Message:
Before i wrap it all up, i just wanted to end up by saying that "In my opinion, there are three key terms in order to succeed in life.
1. You need to motivate yourself (In this case, I motivated myself to create this for the good of the community, and yeah, i cant deny it, FOR THE TOP PRIZE WOOT WOOT!!! I HOPE IVE EARNED IT !!! P.S 2nd>>><<< I hope im not begging>>>>"
2. You need persevere through the tough parts of life ( in this case i perservered in the making of the poem. Ill tell straightforward It aint easy!
3. You need to Love what you intend to do. No Comment.
This now concludes my entry i hope.
Sorry for the grammatical errors along the way or any other issues
(If you have any more questions regarding my entry or need any clarification of any stanza, give me a buzz, Oh, wait, thats personal information, Sorry mom. Hehe, anyway i really hoped you liked it and consider me a worthy candidate for the Grand Prize of Over 20m worth of Stuff!
Please take the time to like the thanks button to show support for my entry! (now fully edited.)
Now that it is edited, there are a lot of twists and turns and tone changes. However, I'm happy i changed it because now, instead of it being 100% deep and "Shakespeare like", i added some humor into it which gives it a unique twist enjoy!
GG ALL.
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