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Alright, here goes!
I have a strong feeling ill be typing/thinking for a while....

IGN Royalcommando

This will be two poems from different perspectives.

Grab the ops trash bags,
Don the commandos masks,
Fill the bags with greed....

Buy all the cannons,
Stock up on big bags of flashguns
Give it all away....

The first poem is written from the sight of a child, with the exception of the last line, sorta. Second is written from the perspective of an adult.

In a way, some kids are really inconsiderate. Ive seen some people who go Trick or Treating just for the candy, and nothing else. Not even to hang out with friends. If i could, i would tell my parents to not spend so much and let me only give candy to the little ones who arent greedy. But that would be really disapppointing and mean to the others. I hope you liked the poem and my meaning to it

I kinda quit PL/SL until i saw this thread! Thanks for pulling me back in (:

Awww, SL related?...im gonna make a new version of both....

Alright, new poems are written! The meaning stil stands, however, just less shown in the poems
You might want to check on your syllables, second lines have 6 and 8 respectively