Review my SL Video please?

**Slant** · 11-13-2011, 04:34 AM

haha robovoice is pretty cool! lol its like one of the droids is giving commentary

**Silentarrow** · 11-13-2011, 08:05 AM

Yep! 10-1:00 sounds like a robot

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You should try writing out what you want to say before making the video, it'll sound a lot smoother.

**Zeus** · 11-13-2011, 11:28 AM

Originally Posted by Silentarrow

Yep! 10-1:00 sounds like a robot

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You should try writing out what you want to say before making the video, it'll sound a lot smoother.

I tried that aspect, but then I go too fast, so I had to improvise.

Anyways, here is the new one.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XF72Ecwfb2s

**MoarPewPew** · 11-13-2011, 12:34 PM

Originally Posted by Apollo

I tried that aspect, but then I go too fast, so I had to improvise.

Anyways, here is the new one.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XF72Ecwfb2s

I think you did a great job. I would re do your voice over because it was not that smooth. You know what I mean? I would right a script if you have not already. And I would make the basic commands scroll slower. Hard to read without pauseing. Other than that great editing skills and you did a great job!

**Zeus** · 11-13-2011, 01:22 PM

Originally Posted by MoarPewPew

I think you did a great job. I would re do your voice over because it was not that smooth. You know what I mean? I would right a script if you have not already. And I would make the basic commands scroll slower. Hard to read without pauseing. Other than that great editing skills and you did a great job!

Looks like I'll need to practice with a script and time it then, lol. I always end up reading too fast.

**BodMaster** · 11-13-2011, 01:29 PM

Originally Posted by MoarPewPew

I think you did a great job. I would re do your voice over because it was not that smooth. You know what I mean? I would right a script if you have not already. And I would make the basic commands scroll slower. Hard to read without pauseing. Other than that great editing skills and you did a great job!

Agreed what was said was great, it was just the stumbles over your words and breaks in-between the breaks. If you scripted what was said through your voice over that would be good as you wouldn't have any break ups.

And the Vid is 5.01 is this allowed not much over but, don't want to be taken out due to a small technicality like that

**Slant** · 11-13-2011, 01:30 PM

^the pl vid was 5:04 but the vid can be snappier in both editing and the vo
ps check pm

**Zeus** · 11-13-2011, 04:18 PM

Originally Posted by BodMaster

Agreed what was said was great, it was just the stumbles over your words and breaks in-between the breaks. If you scripted what was said through your voice over that would be good as you wouldn't have any break ups.

And the Vid is 5.01 is this allowed not much over but, don't want to be taken out due to a small technicality like that

Last time, a few seconds over was aloud. The thing is, when I upload. It says 5 minute video, but when it's on YouTube, it's 5:04. I don't get why.

I'll try and script it later to see if it works better. Talking really fast makes it hard to think of what to say. Lmao. I'm surprised I didn't stumble over everything.

**Hiei** · 11-13-2011, 04:31 PM

Good video, hope it helps all of the new players ready to join the vast starlegends community

**Zeus** · 11-13-2011, 07:35 PM

Okay, scripted my voice, so once this video is done uploading, I'll post the link here. It should be about 20 minutes. Please critique this one as well. I added background music, but kept my voice in.

**Zeus** · 11-13-2011, 08:06 PM

Here is the video, please critique it further if you can! I really appreciate all the great criticism I'm getting!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4KYDULzV0I

**Silentarrow** · 11-13-2011, 08:11 PM

It won't play for me, it may just be my browser?

**Kahlua** · 11-13-2011, 08:12 PM

Good to see you took my advice on the voice tutorial

Now just work on your timing and your smoothness and it'll be awesome!

**Zeus** · 11-13-2011, 08:17 PM

Originally Posted by Silentarrow

It won't play for me, it may just be my browser?

It was still being processed by YouTube. Check now?

**BodMaster** · 11-13-2011, 08:32 PM

Originally Posted by Silentarrow

It won't play for me, it may just be my browser?

Works finebhere buddy

Noe that was alot! Smoother good Job as Pew said still need to pop in and slow that font down only a little for Shortcut 'Commands' and quite a bit for the CS text to quick to read

May need to play about with the music volume a little more if you want it spot on! Though I really liked the music in the background some parts you could hear the music more than your voice had to keep playing with my volume to make it fully clear. This is me just being picky now