Hi Shadowstar!
It's awesome how u have dedicated ur foruming for guidemaking and help us all improve into better players! Here are few other new player guides as an example so u could get the feeling into which direction u should improve this guide.
http://www.spacetimestudios.com/show...layer%2C+guide
http://www.spacetimestudios.com/show...layer%2C+guide
http://www.spacetimestudios.com/show...uide%2C+player
http://www.spacetimestudios.com/show...Player-s-Guide
http://www.spacetimestudios.com/show...uide%2C+player
http://www.spacetimestudios.com/show...uide%2C+player
http://www.spacetimestudios.com/show...uide%2C+player
These were the results of a quick 5 min search. Happy New Player Guide making
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