Pee that wasn't a song
Pee that wasn't a song
So now I'm about to take some timeOriginally Posted by psychoscream:959433
And, for free, I'll teach you how to rhyme
Whether it be for poetry, for the fun of it
Or for a dope *** grime.
I'm unaware if you know what grime is
But it's just rap where the next line is
Similar in sound, you know, like try this
First take the last syllable
Say it in your head,
Then think bout your next line
It shouldn't be something random like "lol you're dead"
It's supposed to make sense
And add a slight hint of insult
Instead of making up random lines
Because youre raging like the hulk.
And if my grammar's incorrect
Or there's spelling mistakes,
Please don't point them out before looking at what your mother made.
And although they weren't fluent rhymes
The words sound roughly the same
By the way, I never rap
And I'm still beating you at your own game
Nothing related to any players or drug references because they already got me into trouble
What can you see when you go to bathroom pee
What can you see when you go to bathroom pee brother poop
lol that wasn't a song
Omg I laughed lmao
Well I'm off to bed, goodnight loyal fans
Nothing related to any players or drug references because they already got me into trouble
Dude here's a phrase I wanna tell u: if u eat all the candy, the (w)rapper is empty.
Don't rap unless you got
A real rap sense
You ain't no professional
your words is too traditional
Go and try beginners audition
You are in a bad condition
Go somewhere and write your trash
Your mother duck face is what I'm going to smash
go away collect your ash
Nothing left oh the beginner got smashed !
Ps : I'M BATTLING 4 of you and I'm still wining
Last edited by psychoscream; 02-06-2013 at 08:15 PM.
Well I would counter that rap and prove that it's all wrongOriginally Posted by psychoscream:959474
Or whatever you call it, was it a "song"
You claim you can rap, yet you don't know what rap is,
I could spit better bars than that when I was drinking from my mum's..
Wait stop, lets not go there,
Psycho might get excited
"real boobs?" He exclaims, as he closes down
"HotSinglesInYourAreaUnited..
.com, that's how he sends his time,
Searching for females on the web
Then spitting those stupid rhymes..
Wait rhymes? I meant to say incomprehensible lines.
Maybe gets dictionary
I'm sure rhyme will be in there
And if that's still not enough,
Try to compare
Look at my post
Then look back at yours
Notice how mine make sense
And yours are like "bros"
Yay that rhymed,
It must be rap
You obviously never heard how they do it in the ghetto
You know where they'd be putting that cap
Nothing related to any players or drug references because they already got me into trouble
That was a wrong button beginner
So: I will will break it and ill shake it on the dance floor all night long. I will know it when I show it while I sing my rhyming song. I just said song cause its more throng and with long it really rhymes. I will steal it when i feel it, those old golden dancin times. It's so cool im out of high school cause a weekend just began. Do u luv me: text: yes, da, cè can i dance? Oh yes I can. Am I handsome , Well, not ransome, but ill try and get a tan😡 I just beat u😊 ha
Last edited by Busterbiebe; 02-06-2013 at 08:36 PM.
That actually rhymed and had an understandable rythem. But u probably don't even know real music. Quarter notes eighth notes sixteenth half whole. That's a big part of rap composition.
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Last edited by psychoscream; 02-06-2013 at 09:17 PM.
This thread should just b closed all he's doing is bragging how he's better than ppl and criticizing them in the most weirdest ways.....
Jed - Sorcerer, Crp - Sorcerer, Qad - Sorcerer, Puj - Warrior, Onf - Rogue
Remember that thing about AL platinum only being used for elixirs and vanity? Yeah.
Guys the only thing I wanted is to give you fun I have over reacted I will not
Rap Again here and sorry I hope all people do as I will . I'm sorry I can't even rap when I am writing dirty things ..... Let's just write a general rap songs about love or etc...
Am sorry guys :-)
Last edited by psychoscream; 02-06-2013 at 09:15 PM.
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