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    Pee that wasn't a song

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    Quote Originally Posted by psychoscream:959433
    Matud what a name dude
    I bet your now nude
    your rap is a insult to the words
    With me never take the odds


    I don't care about your attention
    screw you and your description
    Your rap is a infection
    there is another words but
    For you I won't even mention
    Hah
    So now I'm about to take some time
    And, for free, I'll teach you how to rhyme
    Whether it be for poetry, for the fun of it
    Or for a dope *** grime.

    I'm unaware if you know what grime is
    But it's just rap where the next line is
    Similar in sound, you know, like try this

    First take the last syllable
    Say it in your head,
    Then think bout your next line
    It shouldn't be something random like "lol you're dead"

    It's supposed to make sense
    And add a slight hint of insult
    Instead of making up random lines
    Because youre raging like the hulk.

    And if my grammar's incorrect
    Or there's spelling mistakes,
    Please don't point them out before looking at what your mother made.

    And although they weren't fluent rhymes
    The words sound roughly the same
    By the way, I never rap
    And I'm still beating you at your own game
    Nothing related to any players or drug references because they already got me into trouble

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    Quote Originally Posted by psychoscream View Post
    Pee that wasn't a song
    Oh i think making raps is childish unless they are good like Matud's above me. I just wanted to point out that ur words don't rhyme and there are certainly random phrases thrown around here and there.

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    What can you see when you go to bathroom pee
    What can you see when you go to bathroom pee brother poop
    lol that wasn't a song

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    Omg I laughed lmao

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    Quote Originally Posted by psychoscream View Post
    What can you see when you go to bathroom pee
    What can you see when you go to bathroom pee brother poop
    lol that wasn't a song
    its "when you go to THE bathroom".

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    Well I'm off to bed, goodnight loyal fans
    Nothing related to any players or drug references because they already got me into trouble

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    Dude here's a phrase I wanna tell u: if u eat all the candy, the (w)rapper is empty.

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    Don't rap unless you got
    A real rap sense
    You ain't no professional
    your words is too traditional
    Go and try beginners audition
    You are in a bad condition

    Go somewhere and write your trash
    Your mother duck face is what I'm going to smash
    go away collect your ash
    Nothing left oh the beginner got smashed !
    Ps : I'M BATTLING 4 of you and I'm still wining
    Last edited by psychoscream; 02-06-2013 at 08:15 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by psychoscream:959474
    Don't rap unless you got
    A real rap sense
    You ain't no professional
    your words is too traditional
    Go and try beginners audition




    You are in a bad condition
    Go somewhere and write your trash
    Your duck face Is what will smash
    Your mother is in watched
    Well I would counter that rap and prove that it's all wrong
    Or whatever you call it, was it a "song"
    You claim you can rap, yet you don't know what rap is,
    I could spit better bars than that when I was drinking from my mum's..


    Wait stop, lets not go there,
    Psycho might get excited
    "real boobs?" He exclaims, as he closes down
    "HotSinglesInYourAreaUnited..

    .com, that's how he sends his time,
    Searching for females on the web
    Then spitting those stupid rhymes..
    Wait rhymes? I meant to say incomprehensible lines.

    Maybe gets dictionary
    I'm sure rhyme will be in there
    And if that's still not enough,
    Try to compare

    Look at my post
    Then look back at yours
    Notice how mine make sense
    And yours are like "bros"

    Yay that rhymed,
    It must be rap
    You obviously never heard how they do it in the ghetto
    You know where they'd be putting that cap
    Nothing related to any players or drug references because they already got me into trouble

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    That was a wrong button beginner

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    So: I will will break it and ill shake it on the dance floor all night long. I will know it when I show it while I sing my rhyming song. I just said song cause its more throng and with long it really rhymes. I will steal it when i feel it, those old golden dancin times. It's so cool im out of high school cause a weekend just began. Do u luv me: text: yes, da, cè can i dance? Oh yes I can. Am I handsome , Well, not ransome, but ill try and get a tan😡 I just beat u😊 ha
    Last edited by Busterbiebe; 02-06-2013 at 08:36 PM.

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    That actually rhymed and had an understandable rythem. But u probably don't even know real music. Quarter notes eighth notes sixteenth half whole. That's a big part of rap composition.

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    Quote Originally Posted by psychoscream View Post
    The beginner is going to bed
    With his little bare Ted
    he is crying all over the night
    He saw mom videos on a site

    ps : how does that fits I am finished raping on you Last thin screw you ...
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    This thread should just b closed all he's doing is bragging how he's better than ppl and criticizing them in the most weirdest ways.....

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    Lolz

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    Quote Originally Posted by psychoscream View Post
    The beginner is going to bed
    With his little bare Ted
    he is crying all over the night
    He saw mom videos on a site

    ps : how does that fits I am finished raping on you Last thin screw you ...
    >raping on you
    The only thing you might be.. raping.. is your possible dignity, if you had any to begin with.
    This thread is going downhill fast..
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    Quote Originally Posted by Busterbiebe View Post
    This thread should just b closed all he's doing is bragging how he's better than ppl and criticizing them in the most weirdest ways.....
    I agree.

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    Guys the only thing I wanted is to give you fun I have over reacted I will not
    Rap Again here and sorry I hope all people do as I will . I'm sorry I can't even rap when I am writing dirty things ..... Let's just write a general rap songs about love or etc...
    Am sorry guys :-)
    Last edited by psychoscream; 02-06-2013 at 09:15 PM.

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