Choose-Your-Own-Story Alterra Edition

[Corpser]

I tgought it was good but i got confused maybe try the spoiler tags

[Lowlyspy]

I tgought it was good but i got confused maybe try the spoiler tags

They are in spoiler tags. U on the app?

[noobmigo]

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang.


I'll read this in my spare time. ^^

[BodMaster]

Wowza! think im just gonna read them all :O the Enchantress has me hooked now :O

[Lowlyspy]

Wowza! think im just gonna read them all :O the Enchantress has me hooked now :O

LOL i reread the enchantress beginning and thought "what the hell was i thinking??" so instead of change the beginning i would make the part 2's really sticky to make up fpr the lackluster beginning

Starting Enchantress: 2 now, should be done in like 30 minutes judging by how long it took me to detail Enchantress: 1.

[BodMaster]

LOL i reread the enchantress beginning and thought "what the hell was i thinking??" so instead of change the beginning i would make the part 2's really sticky to make up fpr the lackluster beginning

Starting Enchantress: 2 now, should be done in like 30 minutes judging by how long it took me to detail Enchantress: 1.

It sure worked buddy! 3.40am and got my eyes wide peeled for this xD

[Lowlyspy]

Hehe well get some saline and drop some in your eyes.

Enchantress: 2 is up!

Feedback is once again appreciated.

[BodMaster]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!

 

Best comedic chapter yet! ROFL xD Wasn't expecting that so early into the story :O

Well worth staying up for haha

[Lowlyspy]

Glad you enjoyed it.

Tomorrow brings the warrior part 2's.

EDIT: btw, could u guys give some feedback on the dialogue please? I very rarely put dialogue in my stories and originally had no intention on doing so for these stories but I figured I would do it anyways and see what you guys thought.

[Lowlyspy]

I just finished Warrior: 1 AND Warrior: 2, i think they are very entertaining but of course the readers are the judges, ALL YOU FEEDBACKS ARE BELONG TO US

[TechniShock]

I love these kind of books! Especially when its PL version

Keep up the good work Lowlyspy!

[Lowlyspy]

Thanks John.

Seriously no one else has any feedback, heck idc what you say, i just wanna hear how i'm doin so far and if you want maybe yall can discuss whats comin next

Personally i am very proud of the stories so far, they are turning out WAY better than i had first expected, im actually already picturing the end in my head lol

So i say once again...

ALL YOUR FEEDBACKZ ARE BELONG TO US!

[Cahaun]

Lowly! You don't mind if I create a front cover picture for the bird? I have an awesome picture in my head and I want to draw it.

[Lowlyspy]

Feel free amigo.

[Lowlyspy]

Nooo my computer pooped the bed, for some reason the screen wont turn on.

For now this project is postponed cuz I really dont want to do this on my phone.

I'll continue this when I have a working computer T_T

[Lowlyspy]

YES! I got a laptop for christmas so i will be continuing this project starting tmrw! Keep an eye out for the CHAPTER 3 INSTALLMENTS in the next few days with the next Avian stories coming tmrw

[Pandar]

Posted this to Facebook and Twitter to bring some more peeps in on the action. Great idea!

[TechniShock]

The enchantress adventure i turning out really good! I would want to see the rest of the story.

[Pwnage502]

DANG, release archer choices! I want to know if my family is okay!!!

[Lowlyspy]

The enchantress adventure i turning out really good! I would want to see the rest of the story.

Actually I think I made the ursan and enchantress stories collide a bit early, dang lol.

Thanks for the tweet pan. Hope everyone enjoys these stories, I know I do lol