I tgought it was good but i got confused maybe try the spoiler tags
I tgought it was good but i got confused maybe try the spoiler tags
They are in spoiler tags. U on the app?Originally Posted by Corpser:509884
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang.
I'll read this in my spare time. ^^
Last edited by noobmigo; 12-12-2011 at 08:44 PM.
Wowza! think im just gonna read them all :O the Enchantress has me hooked now :O
Still trying to comprehend how 2k+ can die from Barrels O.o
LOL i reread the enchantress beginning and thought "what the hell was i thinking??" so instead of change the beginning i would make the part 2's really sticky to make up fpr the lackluster beginning
Starting Enchantress: 2 now, should be done in like 30 minutes judging by how long it took me to detail Enchantress: 1.
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
Hehe well get some saline and drop some in your eyes.
Enchantress: 2 is up!
Feedback is once again appreciated.
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!
Well worth staying up for haha
Still trying to comprehend how 2k+ can die from Barrels O.o
Glad you enjoyed it.
Tomorrow brings the warrior part 2's.
EDIT: btw, could u guys give some feedback on the dialogue please? I very rarely put dialogue in my stories and originally had no intention on doing so for these stories but I figured I would do it anyways and see what you guys thought.
Last edited by Lowlyspy; 12-13-2011 at 02:13 AM.
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
I just finished Warrior: 1 AND Warrior: 2, i think they are very entertaining but of course the readers are the judges, ALL YOU FEEDBACKS ARE BELONG TO US
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
I love these kind of books! Especially when its PL version
Keep up the good work Lowlyspy!
PL-Mageulous, Fyscikal, Affluential, Lifetech, Foxtastic
AL-Mageulous
Thanks John.
Seriously no one else has any feedback, heck idc what you say, i just wanna hear how i'm doin so far and if you want maybe yall can discuss whats comin next
Personally i am very proud of the stories so far, they are turning out WAY better than i had first expected, im actually already picturing the end in my head lol
So i say once again...
ALL YOUR FEEDBACKZ ARE BELONG TO US!
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
Lowly! You don't mind if I create a front cover picture for the bird? I have an awesome picture in my head and I want to draw it.
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"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
Nooo my computer pooped the bed, for some reason the screen wont turn on.
For now this project is postponed cuz I really dont want to do this on my phone.
I'll continue this when I have a working computer T_T
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
YES! I got a laptop for christmas so i will be continuing this project starting tmrw! Keep an eye out for the CHAPTER 3 INSTALLMENTS in the next few days with the next Avian stories coming tmrw
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
Posted this to Facebook and Twitter to bring some more peeps in on the action. Great idea!
The enchantress adventure i turning out really good! I would want to see the rest of the story.
PL-Mageulous, Fyscikal, Affluential, Lifetech, Foxtastic
AL-Mageulous
DANG, release archer choices! I want to know if my family is okay!!!
Xinsidious - 63 Dex Bird
Errotic - 13 Int Mage
Krelgore - 12 Dex Bear
Actually I think I made the ursan and enchantress stories collide a bit early, dang lol.Originally Posted by JonathanShek:523955
Thanks for the tweet pan. Hope everyone enjoys these stories, I know I do lol
"Annie are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay Annie?" - The King of Pop, Michael Jackson
Down With the Rep
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