Quote Originally Posted by BodMaster View Post
For a first attempt that was pretty good, there are a few things that I would like to point out if thats okay,

Your Voice was pretty low, hard to understand what you were saying, and the music was louder than your voice (Had to turn my volume to 100% and still could not make out what you were saying at parts). Pretty basic information, did not include as much as possible from what's required/suggested in the OP. If you are just looking for the vanity then fair enough but if you want a shot at winning I would edit and script what you have said in your previous submission and make sure that you are talking very clear and precise.

I do disagree whole heartedly that what you said about the Premium char, to be able to get the best gear at such an early level helps massively! I have known players to get up to 25-30 with just this gear alone (excluding the weapons and extra armour at certain levels. 11 Auction slots, extra inventory slots and a load of stim n pp's and a little credit to get you started is very generous at the price STS have it on offer.

Hope this helps, and good luck
Thanks, I kinda rushed it, mainly for the vanity (shhh I only have one vanity in SL so far...)
I did forget about the other benefits for an elite character which I do enjoy, just that the armor does not satisfy me after lv10:/
Do you think I could edit mine and send it again? I'll lower the volume by a lot to make sure people can hear.
Thank you for the constructive feedback

EDIT: Do you think there's enough information for it to qualify? I made sure to include every topic they asked for but might has missed out on one...